"So, I'm adding my two cents to your obviously open journal. I love you, Author. Now stop writing about me."

Laughed SO hard. I swear, I'm reviewing for those lines alone, because they were amazing and I'm really bad at conveniently forgetting to review. Keep writing!

Extremely original, and I don't usually review stories anymore. GREAT JOB. (:

Loved it. Written really well. Thanks for sharing.

Haha, that was great. It's a sweet, sweet story.

Wow. This was amazing! It had charm, humor, and cute romance, but it had a sweet story behind it. Wonderfully done. :)

That was so cute, and well written too. Nice job! :)

I like it. The commentary style was pretty amusing :D

great story! wickedly funny and cute, i really liked the formatting, it was orginal and made the story all the more interesting. i was kind of surprised by the end, but i think my happiness overrode that emotion. i think i might have also liked it cause i'm a bit of a wallflower, and now i want my own scrawny idiot

I enjoyed it, i was very cute, just what i wanted to read tonight :D

I loved this commentary style of writing! Any more one-shots coming?

Cute!

Great work,

E.

Just one big heart.

Funny, clever, witty and a little bit sweet. Just the way I like them.

Thanks. This story made me evening.

wow. it's not often you get to find something this good here at FP. This was nicely done. Love it. This will go to my faves.

dayum this one is going on my fav D

Aw, this was really cute. I liked the nicknames touch, although now I'm wondering what the equivalent of this girl has named me at school... Unless I'm the equivalent, because I pretty much do the same thing. Anyway, good job, really enjoyed it. :-)