Reviews for Used
harajuku love chapter 1 . 10/28/2008
Dude, this is like exactly how i feel about my ex best friend.

Really, really pretty (:
Heidi Andrews chapter 1 . 10/19/2008
Gah...

just wrote a huge long review, and accidentaly deleted it.

wah

i love your new poem, especially the "we were pawns at your touch paragraph"

i am currently writing this from Sydney airport, at one of those free internet stations. Feel loved :D

our plane has been delayed, was meant to take off 10 mins ago, and we still have a while until boarding, so i am filling up time reading your stories. yay

my email wont work properly on this computer other wise i would be emailing you. instead you get to read a massive 'review"

ok, well i ought to go - i dont know how much more i can fit into this review slot. probabli alot, but matthew is making me gho play cards with him, so i wont have the chance to findout. sob

ok,

bye

Heidi (sarahh. duh)

x
deefective chapter 1 . 10/19/2008
Oh, I really like this line:

"Cause this is the lie you’re singing

The mixed up, jumbled up

Web you’re weaving

I didn’t want to let you know

But- we’re leaving."

It's very song-y and it has a nice ring to it when spoken out loud, which means it was well-written. The song as a whole was good. I like the rhyming also because it didn't sound forced at all. In most songs I find that it does but not in this one. Nicely done.

-Dee, from the Review Marathon.

[Check up on it. Link's in my profile.]
AsTheRainFalls chapter 1 . 10/18/2008
This is really deep. I can completely relate, I just got out of a destructive friendship that reminds me so much of this song. "We followed like good friends do/ The chaos and the empty too/ We tried our best through and though/ Until we realized/The centre of the chaos was nothing new/ The centre of the chaos was/ You." Sorry to be redundant and quote half of your song, but that part touched me the most. It's so real.