Reviews for Listen
Moon-Chaser chapter 1 . 10/22/2008
I love this, I have people that try and twist my words as well, but we won't let that stop us! I just love the way that you think, the way that you write.

Keep it up.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 10/19/2008
"Well, now; do your thing;/twisting my words and/mending my rhymes."... those semi-colons aren't right because they do not separate individual sentences.

Other than that your punctuation was great, which I liked.

I liked your formatting, it worked well with the piece. I also like the repetition in that fourth stanza, it makes a good emphasis. Nice job.

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Time To Change chapter 1 . 10/19/2008
deefective chapter 1 . 10/19/2008
I like the whole way you arranged your stanza's and verses. It reads really well and it makes the flow go smoothly. But I have to say that the third stanza seems out of place. The writing style in that one is different from the rest and that sort of throws off the flow and feel of the piece. Other than that though, nicely done.

-Dee, from the Review Marathon.

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