Reviews for my little secret
Tailored4Dreams chapter 1 . 3/1/2009
Another Brilliant One

I Really Like This One

&& Can Relate To It

Great Ending

Moon-Chaser chapter 1 . 10/22/2008
I really can relate to this, such strong emotion in this. It is something that I have been thinking about recently and I don't know if I could, but then never tried before.

Keep it up.
Time To Change chapter 1 . 10/19/2008
emotive and easy to relate to.
exsilium chapter 1 . 10/19/2008
Wow.. I had no idea it would be this good..
inkspatters chapter 1 . 10/19/2008
This was really good, in my opinion (but then I don't know the first thing about poetry). It had so much raw emotion in it that I couldn't help but feel for you and with you, which I think is the aim of poetry right? To make people feel things?

Anyway, I also thought the concept of being secure in one's flaws was really interesting, I suppose it's a different type of perfection than actual perfection, but it still seems like perfection to me. I also found the idea of freedom being impossible because we bind ourselves down too much interesting.

All in all this was a strong piece and I liked the emotive language and feelings that it evoked as well as the interesting ideas that it presented.

Good work on this,


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