|Reviews for sunday girl|
| Isca chapter 1 . 10/20/2008
'Circles are too sacred.' Beautiful imagery!
| fairytale failure chapter 1 . 10/19/2008
Brings new meaning to 'died inside,' doesn't it? I liked your descriptions of her pregnancy and use of the symbol of the circle.
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 10/19/2008
"she had, of/course, had a name"... the had had thing sounded awkward
I like how you split your line breaks in certain times, especially mind-set and 24/7, it was a nice interesting touch to the piece. I also like your word choice and descriptions, they were interesting. I also like the whole color thing in the beginning, it was a nice touch. Great piece.
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