Reviews for My duty
dustytiger chapter 1 . 10/26/2008
not usually the side of war i read about, but i like it, great work, thank you for sharing
fatbird33 chapter 1 . 10/22/2008
good, nice poem about soldiers. the only cc i can give is maybe not use the word destroy. because it seems that you're trying to honor the soldiers, and destroy isn't a very positive word. i dont know, just a suggestion. otherwise, nicely done.