Reviews for M&M's To Share
EverEverAfter chapter 1 . 4/5/2010
I really like how this was written, especially the timeline. I've often felt like this and I think you've captured the feeling perfectly.
LemonScience13 chapter 1 . 1/26/2010
:-( Bittersweet M&M's, huh?
blurrylights chapter 1 . 1/21/2009
I found this really funny, oddly. I felt the frustration she felt, but I liked how it started and ended with hunger. :)
farrahness chapter 1 . 11/30/2008
I liked that, but knowing me, I would've succumbed to tears if it had a happy ending.
Erlkoenigin chapter 1 . 10/20/2008
Gefällt mir gut, richtig lebensecht (ist ja wohl auch kaum fiktionalisiert?), was ich mich nur frage, warum die Zeit zuerst von 4.35h bis 4.56h tröpfelt und es dann plötzlich wieder 4.30h ist. Dieser Widerspruch in der Chronologie ist mit schon aufgefallen bei: 4:52. I felt stupid. The bus would be coming at four-thirty.
null.account chapter 1 . 10/19/2008
This was original. I liked it a lot. You expressed the frustration that she was beginning to feel very well, and I liked how you would reveal bits of his personality as the time elapsed.

So, great job! :]