Reviews for Nicotine
Counting Petals chapter 1 . 12/22/2008
This was beautiful. There were a few really short sentences that made it sound choppy in a couple of places, but overall...brilliant.
MasterPlanDELETED chapter 1 . 10/22/2008
0o0 Jeez, this is really good! Beautiful! Well done! Great! I'm just... wow you know... It captures from the first moment to the very last word! I love it really! "If I could I would marry this feeling..." I loved this part! One of the so many strong moments! Well done again!