Well, I finished reading.

Interesting. Looks like I was kinda right with the secret Island and the inhabitants. :)

I can see that Morgan is very much based on yourself. So, she is the same Morgan in your other stories? Do all your stories have the same canon? It kind of explains everything now. Hope to hear from you soon. :)

My guess is that Morgan will turn the frozen donkey wheel, catapulting her to Tunisia while everyone in the school starts moving through time. For a while it's interesting, but then everyone starts getting nosebleeds and will die unless Avanwë turns the wheel as well. Also the Others are the original inhabitants who defected from their unit because they refused to test the hydrogen bomb on the Island. Also the coach is actually the father of Morgan's sister. Hopefully you understand these references. ;)

My serious guess is that you are going to bring up time travel. :)

Normally I would say that naming a child Avanwë is implausible, but with people naming their children "Sarah McCain Palin Ciptak" and "Adolf Hitler Campbell" I'll believe it. ;)

So far, so very confusing. Looks like Morgan is behind the attack. I am on break next week and I will force myself to finish reading this. :)

Hi! Sorry I didn't review earlier, I've been away. So you've finally finished with the story, not the charecters. I can understand why you don't want to get rid of them, it must be great to have a set of charecters that are fun to write about. I'll look forward to reading more about them! Till the next story!

Nightclaw

hm...

your story is pretty interesting.

But i am sure you could've made it longer. Described things in more detail, more depth.

Some bits seemed sorta rushed too.

But i must admit, it was so sad when she was being tortured and everything, i started crying...lol

It's a good story, an interesting plot too

But it the start was very confusing as it just started off...the way it did. If you ever decide to change it, perhaps you could i dunno give a little more background before going head straight into the story.

Hehe..that is just my opinion though. I hope it helps.

It really was an enjoyable story to read! You have talent! Haha...more than me anyways.

thanks:D

okay, now i really can't wait to get to the end of this story because I WANT TO KNOW THE ENDING! this is really ood mystery/action- loving it!

argh- you're a marvelous suspens(or)?- okay, excellent suspense writer and I exult you!

i really like this story so far, and i hope beyond all hopes that Morgan is a 'good guy'!

Wow- this is so good!

I wonder what Morgan's up to? Hmm... is she the heroine or the antagonist? He he, can't wait til find out!

She sounds really smart and sophisticated, by the way!

Excellent.

It all came together in the end and at the end of every chapter I was waiting for more, and isn't that what makes a good story?

This story made me think a lot. Thanks. D

Keep writing,

Kendra

Wow! Great again! Not much to say this time round. But great! Is Peter still going to survive? He can't die, he's awesome! And where is Awanwe in all of this? Update soon!

i was enjoying it so much...and then... you kill Peter. this is like a really strange cross between lord of the rings(the huge battles), wizard of Oz(Flying monkeys), a good mystery movie(All those clues). Pardon the really bad simile Any way this chapter made me like Athos just a little bit more. i understand his line of thinking now. Good-luck with the next chapter...may the words come freely.

Tropical Storm Fay

This is such a good chapter!

What didn't make sense in the last info-packed chapter mostly makes sense now.

Is Sherwood Forest from Robin Hood? I know you said that there would be a lot of connections to that story, but I've never read it so...

And Angelica is Athos' sister right? Are they human, like Morgan? And are Peter and Eric human too? I didn't understand that.

I cannot wait to read the next chapter. D

Keep writing, Kendra

this story is so mentally challenging! Okay, so she isn't an angel, but some sort of protector. you said the woodland wanderers were hated by both sides. does that mean the elves weren't so pristine?

Peter's adopted family seemed nice. Athos is a little confusing though. Is he like a secret member of the WW, or is he just a wishy washy villain? these are the questions that haunt me! He he...

Superb writing as usual,

TropicalStormFay

Wow! Another great chapter! A lot of previous thing make much more sense now. Very clever! I liked her story. Not a lotto comment on though apart from its brilliance! Will we find out more details next chapter? Where abouts is Undiscovered Island in the Pacific Ocean? Near what country? And how does Morgan participate in the war if she's at school? Can't wait for the for the next one!

Is she an Angel? or something like one? i have a feeling she is something super natural.