|Reviews for close your eye to the world|
| Long Island Iced Tea chapter 1 . 10/21/2008
Oh yeah I sort of felt like this after I saw Mumbai Meri Jaan. You wrote this about the blasts, right? I've never really felt close enough to Mumbai to 'feel' the sadness of it all, but after reading your poem I sort of can understand.
| english summer rain chapter 1 . 10/21/2008
one little grammar thing: in i. third stanza, it's churches not churchs. :)
and also, just something to keep in mind, the thing about poetry is that there are almost no boundaries, and due to that sometimes it can drift from poetry to prose being broken up into stanzas. some of your stanzas didn't feel right, to me. but yeah, KEEP WRITING i want moar. :D