|Reviews for The Ancients|
| ryozumiazaki chapter 1 . 10/25/2008
Well, that was freaking awesome. XD There should be more of this, what's wrong with you? Making this a one shot...
| Makami chapter 1 . 10/21/2008
Aww, this was great, V! Thank you so very, very much. :3
Hey, 3/5-7 reviews. Looks like you might have to write more soon. *hoping so*
| Goom chapter 1 . 10/21/2008
Ve... I wish it were longer D:
Some awkward wording in places but it got exciting when they caught up to their prey ;D
| 96NESSA chapter 1 . 10/21/2008
Your story is very detailed, I'm really jealous of your talent. After all I write stories, but I can never get it as discipled as i want it to be. So keep up the writing, your really good at it.