|Reviews for Sex|
| Kir Sirin chapter 1 . 1/22/2009
Very nice use of words, really. The layout of the poem actually made it better.
Heh. Who knew I would ever read a poem about sex? xD
Now you owe me TWO.
But, really, this was actually nice...I mean in a good way not in a 'sex is nice' sorta way. xD Cause, I wouldnt know...And fankly, after a bad experience this Christmas with yaoi doushinjis...I dont think I want to have sex. xD Ever.
Blame Tristan. He bought them.
And has them.
And my mom looks at me funny...
| StarGazer88 chapter 1 . 10/21/2008
heartrenchingly sad. you feel their shame profoundly.
| Smoky Bear chapter 1 . 10/21/2008
this is a marvellous poem. the word choice is great and so is the choice in picked out details, they allude to a deeper, more complicated tale but reveal just enough to be part of the moment, without knowing the history. really cool x