Well, that was interesting, definitely interesting. Nice and cute :)

Aww...love the story!

x

Ali

haha i really lyked this. sweet and funny:). if u think ur writings bad u shud c mine lol, i think ur a gud writer. cant wait 2 read ur otha stories;)

rock on

Aww. So filled with fluff! I love fluff, so that made this very likeable.

And yeah; the only problem I had with this story was covered by your reasons. I did believe the relationship went a little fast, but as you said, open bar.

Overall, good job. :D

. DeeDee .

I ADORED this; I thought they were great together and I loved the opportunity to see him think his way through the night. Any chance we'll get a sequel?

Bad? Your story? What has the world come to, if authors can not fully appreciate their own stories!

Have no fear, it was awesome. It was extremely well structured and written. Everything was smooth and the scenes flowed well into one another. The characters were just awesome and realistic. My favorite part of the story was, as Andee lee mentioned, the playfulness between the characters.

The ending was quite nice, too. I like how you never even mentioned "love" (which would have been completely unrealistic in one night) but you still pictured the skipping hearts, the jealousy and the "giddyness" that infatuation can bring about. Bravo!

The lenght of it was just perfect. Had it been any shorter, I wouldn't have connected as well with the characters. I wouldn't have minded if you had written more, though. P

I have to admit that I found how every one was so accepting of Emily. A bit more opposition could have been quite entertaining. Then again, it IS a wedding, so I guess magic can happen.

Okay, I'm done. Sorry about the long review. Thank you infinitely for posting such an awesome story. I'm looking forward to reading more of your stuff.

With all my love,

Fido

although it seems a little fast paced

i do like the length

it was long, and although some people hate that in one-shots

i actually really enjoy reading a long one

makes me feel like i've gotten to know the characters better

and i do like the characters

drake and emily

they seem like they'd last

i was going to comment more about how fast their relationship progressed

but your explanation made it a little easier to accept.

i loved it, despite how much you hated it haha

izzie

this is good

Well, you might not be satisfied, but I thought this story was wonderful! Great characters and fabulous dialogue. I look forward to both a sequel (please!) and the editing job you promised.

Oh geez, you think this was bad? Uh-oh! Everybody, we have a self-deprecating author on our hands.

Bad? What? That was great!

I personally really enjoyed it. I liked the playfulness between your characters.

I know exactly what you mean about finding unexpected things you have to bring up in the story, like those stupid details you know no one will notice but you have to fix them anyway, yeah. Don't worry about the length. People that want to read stuff on here want to read GOOD STUFF, no matter how long it is. That's what I say, anyway.

I liked the ending. Actually, I loved the ending. So it was a little cliche, but so what! Cliches are fun. :-) I liked that she wasn't so sweet and innocent, that they ended up together in a realistic way - like he wasn't falling all over her and whispering that he loved her and all of that jazz. It played out as something that could have really happened in real life.

I do agree with you on the title though - not my favorite. :-( It's not bad, though...

A little bit of constructive criticism - there wasn't enough conflict. The story was good and the plot was well played, but I would have liked to see a little bit more opposition - maybe from Drake's mom or something - I don't know, something to add a little spice into all the sweetness.

For this being your first story you've ever posted, I'd say it's absolutely fantastic.

:-)

Keep writing! And "I'm Yours" is a fantastic song! Sorry this review was so long and pointless, ha ha!

-Andee :-)

Nice!