Goo. Love the repetition.

I think this could be a song, I don't know, I like the last part about calling the name again and again.

When i read this i actually feel your emotion, it is nice for someone to have such passion when they write albeit short but staright to the point.

I liked it, i would like to see more from you, perhaps a story or something more tha could really enlighten me, more so than your poem has.