Reviews for Thirty Floors
theboyfriend-and-theprettygirl chapter 1 . 10/22/2008
Hey Andee,

Well I didn't think your story was cheesy. I Enjoyed it.

But then again, I enjoy any story you write :D

Keep up the good work babe

x o x
LondonLi chapter 1 . 10/22/2008
Absolutely fabulous. It's definitely one of my favorite one-shots I've ever read. I know it's supposed to be a snapshot, but any chance of a sequel? Natalie's a very fun character to read and Kyle is truly drool-worthy!:) Thanks for being my momentary supplier of happiness!
xx chapter 1 . 10/22/2008
this was *absolutely* adorable... loved the language, loved the premise, loved the characters (especially, well, him :-)
In Love With Your Love chapter 1 . 10/22/2008
hah. How do you forget one of your friends is pregnant? Especially if she's in the waddling stage. :P

B.O.B. – Battery Operated Boyfriend. LMAO. Okay, the whole conversation about... BOB was hilarious.

Oh. The Elegance Hotel, huh? Is this a real place? You know... like really real... one that people can maybe drive to... you know, IF they want to, maybe, ride the elevator to the 30th floor? :P

hahah. I had to read the line about the emergency stop button twice to get it. I was like, "hm.. Oh. OH!"

*bursts out laughing* She called her 'fatty'!

LOL. Oh. whoa. My side hurts from laughing so much. Her rant was soo funny. "Why do you hate me, God?" *giggles*

"I-just-saw-you-looking-at-me smiles" LOL. I hate getting caught looking at someone. Embarrassing.

Ah. OMG. That was so cute, going through the doors together. aw.

Oh, $#!*. She said that out loud. "That's it?" hahahahh.

aw. He didn't want to let go of her hand! aww.

*squee* Yay! That was so cute and adorable and fun and amazing and just fabulous! I loved it!

Don't worry about the length. It was perfect. If you make it too short it'll be all crammed together and no... I like it how it is!

& oh. I see. Macy's elevator in NYC. nah. The Elegance Hotel elevator is so much better! :D
barelyamiable chapter 1 . 10/22/2008
Oh, wow. This was SO cute. I loved how awkward they were with each other. Very genuine. And such a romantic idea. (: I loved reading this!
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