Reviews for Cliché
smilebehappy chapter 1 . 11/25/2008
This is really good. I like the setup. The last line really ties it all together :)
jasminelol chapter 1 . 10/22/2008
This poem is really uplifting (: I really like the last verse. Good work! :D
RNE chapter 1 . 10/22/2008
Good. Like how it rhymes without sounding wrong.
Isca chapter 1 . 10/22/2008
'Colour cliche.' I liked that line. Good alliteration.

'Let me be your moonlit sun.' Beautiful imagery!

'Let me be your chosen one.' AMAZING LINE! :D

Isca
lymli chapter 1 . 10/22/2008
the first line reminded me of somebody who I hate... but this poem is lovely, and love won't be never a cliche.