Reviews for Proud Now?
MissMelodie chapter 1 . 1/9/2009
thats awful, feeling like no matter how hard you try its not good enough :-/

i like the rhetorical questions and details
Childish Intentions chapter 1 . 1/6/2009
That was a nice short poem. I liked it.

If you have tyhe time, could you read my song? It's an older version of it. Hopefully sometime soon I'll have it edited.
DiaRose chapter 1 . 10/31/2008
This is nice, it feels really angry. It's slightly choppy, but that almost works here with the emotion. good job.