Reviews for Cheat
Natty-Natty chapter 23 . 2/24/2018
I know that must've being ages, but this is a really Nice story. U should try continue. Ir create a sequência tô it
MusicGurl8129 chapter 23 . 2/4/2014
This Chapter was interesting. I wish you finished the Story though. I mean for some People it would be an okay ending, but it had a few untied ends.
Even though I was disappointed about Skyler, I was glad you were able to clean Trey & Haley (putting my Bias Feelings/Opinions aside), I'm glad you got that over with. I'm not too happy about Skyler & Hayley because, duh I rooted for them. But not entirely for those reasons only. Even though they became 'Friends' again, they should have cleared them up. There were problems between them that they didn't even realize were there. Skyler had to break up with Natalie. Not because of Haley, (but Haley does prove the fact) that he doesn't feel anything for her, and that he is not happy with her. Also I think Skyler & Haley had a chance, because I think she still has something for Skyler. In her last encounter with Skyler, it proved all that, she also fell for him quickly, it took her a while to fall for Trey. She also has these little feelings for Skyler (Skyler totally does, but he's Happy for her. I don't think he believes he would deserve her and that it's his Girlfriends Best Friend and it would never happen.), hard to explain, but I felt somehow you were hinting it? Maybe just to satisfy us poor Hayler Shippers (Yep, I named them.), I dunno.
Anyways, moving to something different. There is SO something going on between Trey's Dad & Haley's Mom totally have something going. I ship they're Parents together which is another reason I don't want Trey & Haley together.
Besides all this, I enjoyed the ride, you're Story bestowed. Not gonna lie though, I wanted you to finish it. But not everybody get's what they want. *Sniff, sniff* I'm going to go listen to Adele songs now... ;)
MusicGurl8129 chapter 20 . 2/4/2014
Okay, I gotta admit I'm kinda disappointed. It's just I don't know... Trey & Haley seem better off as Friends to me then together. It just feels like there's this big distance between Hayley & Skyler now that you can barely get the right to compare them. I mean, so much has happened with her and Trey that it feels like they're their own Story now. I dunno, you said more Skyler next Chapter, so we'll see. It's just there's only 3 Chapters left. So I'm scared that you decided to just Kill the Beast instead of tame it. Which btw means so you can end the Story. I guess i'll see..
MusicGurl8129 chapter 16 . 2/4/2014
This was an interesting Chapter with Drew. Geez, he's such a huge jerk.
Personally, I have mixed emotions about this. Not about Drew, about Skyler & Trey. I like Trey & Haley as Friends, but it feels like they might lead to something more. I guess me being all bias I want her with Skyler. I just hope her feelings come back. It also annoys me that Skyler is all mad at her and blah blah blah. I mean come on! She pretty much slept with Trey because of him... he also slept with Natalie for the same reasons. Goodness, I just want Haley & Skyler going back to falling for each other again. *Tear, tear*
MusicGurl8129 chapter 13 . 2/4/2014
I'm glad Hayley didn't have sex with Skyler, I don't want her betraying her Friend like that. I also want Skyler & Hayley to grow closer before doing anything to serious.
Honestly when Hayley & Trey had sex I didn't feel much towards it, maybe because I knew it didn't mean about her and Trey together, it was about herself. Getting over the past, and her confused feelings for Skyler.
The only think I don't like about it is how she just slept with him. It's definitely going to be weird with Trey. I'm fine with the concept as long as she doesn't like Trey more then Skyler, I'm okay. Lol.
I think it was an interesting turn in the Story. Going to change things for sure. Going to read the next Chapter, see ya!
MusicGurl8129 chapter 12 . 2/4/2014
I really like Skyler, when he was talking to Haley at the Lake he said the impact his Parents had on Dylan, which means he was more worried for him, then for himself. Which is something you have got to admire about him. I like Skyler & Hayley's Relationship the most, I can see them going far. Trey actually really annoys me, when he just walked into her House and ate her Mac & Cheese, I decided. I hated him. The Carnival thing was sweet, but he annoys the life out of me. I was literally screaming in my Head wanting to punch him. And trust me I have read about arrogant guys life Trey and, phew. They have never had such an impact on me. I guess at mac & Cheese I lost it. (I love it!)
MusicGurl8129 chapter 11 . 2/4/2014
OMG. I loved this Chapter! (I'm a Skyler Fan...hehe)
I love the emotional Connection between them, so beautiful :)
You did a wonderful Job at this Chapter!
MusicGurl8129 chapter 7 . 2/4/2014
I liked this Chapter, I love it when Cold, Hot 'Bad Boys' suddenly can be all sweet and deep. Haha, weakness of mine.
It was good to see more of Skyler, and more of Haley. I think you did a wonderful Job at this Chapter, good job :)
MusicGurl8129 chapter 5 . 2/4/2014
HEHE. I liked this Chapter, it was cool! :)
MusicGurl8129 chapter 3 . 2/3/2014
I like Skylar better, Trey seems annoying. I don't know, it's too soon to tell.
I love the Story so far ;)
pastelcolors chapter 23 . 6/29/2013
I guess this is the end.
I really have no idea who I sided with the whole entire time. ; o ;" Because Trey really bothered me in the beginning and Skylar had the bad boy with bad experiences thing going on.
But, I really kind of like both of the boys in the end.
Skylar pretty much was the better guy in my mind. Not for Haley, (because I really wouldn't know anything about that,) but just in general. He knew he shouldn't have gone after Haley, and whether of not that was a good idea, it just might've been the right one because Haley lost any romantic feelings towards him.
I don't like how you left us here though since Haley's having these doubts about Trey.
Thank you for the story! o u o"
Kate chapter 23 . 4/21/2013
Teen chapter 23 . 4/3/2013
I think hayley and skylar had better chemistry.
elizabeth chapter 23 . 9/20/2012
I'm Skylar's fan. Obviously.

I think Haley should end up with Skylar. And Natalie-Idk, do whatever you want with her. Fell in love with another guy or something.

I love Dylan. Ugh. It's killing me.

Make Haley and Skylar bestfriends or something. SHOW MORE... You know... Affections? Idk. Just get them to be bestfriends and tell their deepest secrets or you know. JUST JOKE AND LAUGH AND TALK AND PLAY MUCH. I love Haley and Skylar so much it hurts.

And update more. If not... I'll pray for you, don't worry.
Neverland.dream chapter 23 . 7/28/2012
AWWWWWWWWWWWWW... Why didn't you finish the story? :((

I LOVE Skylar by the way.. Does he still like Haley? :D

PUH-LEASE update! Though it's been SO long. PLEASE DO! :))
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