Reviews for Dream's Future Pivot Point
Wing Chant chapter 1 . 3/2/2005
*dances with joy* I love this story as well! Yayness! You just love your writing style! D Yay!

I thought it was interesting to have your character have a dream about her Grandpa's death, but even more tragic when it actually happened. But, hey, people say that they have dreams like that sometimes. Like about their plane blowing up, so they don't go on it just in case. And what happens? The plane blows up. XD I guess they couldn't do anything about her Grandpa dying though. Espicially, if her parents didn't respect her. (

loserz. ;)
Winterheart chapter 1 . 3/10/2004
Wow, an incredible story. You write very clearly, it's easy to understand but in no way boring. I think you have the beginnings of a great writer, to say the least. Please, continue...
Shelti M chapter 1 . 3/29/2003
Good L- erm, I mean, wow. Uplifting really, this story is. A little tragic, true, but still very interesting and wonderfully written. Although you never elaborated on that 'footsteps in the bathroom' thing. I was hoping that was important. Oh well. Overall, a great story.

And thank you so much for your reviews on my poems! I love getting reviews from you; they're so… deep and thought provoking. Somehow. Thank you!
Yuffie.K chapter 1 . 3/15/2003
A sad story with a tinge of sweet sorrow in it. I cannot say to have such a similar experience,all i do is dream occasionally about irrelevent stuff in the future - nothing like yours. Yet, I'm not a religous person... my dreams lead me to believe in fate and destiny... why do these things happen? No one has a clue, and we can only guess...
Needa S chapter 1 . 2/19/2003
Excellent! God works in mysterious ways! God came into my life after my brother died. He had always been there but it took my brothers death to open my eyes. I am now a Christian. Sorry, I never meant to go on and on Good job! Keep writing..
Dawn I. Cambridge chapter 1 . 11/8/2002
Eh... it's okay. A little boring, though...
Sparkles-Chan chapter 1 . 6/12/2002
Amen
Naeginnie6 who is inevitably not logged in A-hem chapter 1 . 5/7/2002
Oh. That was really touching. I like it a lot... muy bien!
Mistress Jakira chapter 1 . 4/28/2002
This is marvelous...is it true? I know everyone's asked that, but like someone before me said, it's so honest that it just doesn't seem to be totally fictitious. And the inclusion of God is something I really like-I see so many people crying out how they don't believe in God anymore, and it's nice to see that not everyone does that. It never ceases to make me smile when I see that.

I really couldn't say the right thing to put this story to justice, so I won't try...but you're really an amazing writer, and I hope you continue to do what you do. :) Keep it up! ~MJ
Cassandra Anthemyst chapter 1 . 4/22/2002
is this a true story? it's so honest, i can't believe that it isn't true. thanks for sharing it, it was very inspirational
Undraya chapter 1 . 3/6/2002
so sad-and interesting! you really explained much of the character as if it were you...hmmm...good characters with their feelings and personality, good plot with all the grieve in it and all the realization of learning the best about the world-and God.
ReaDiNGS DaRK RoSe chapter 1 . 3/3/2002
i know i sound really stupid but is this tru? because if it is WOW!

it doesnt matter though it was fanftstic! amazing really good well done and thank you for all the great reviews on my fics and poetry and stuff!

Jami xxx
Snowlily chapter 1 . 2/16/2002
Wow... that was... just wonderful.
LittleMaggie chapter 1 . 1/31/2002
That was beautiful. . . it felt like I was there living through it all too. When my grandfather died two months ago I was devastated. This is so beautiful in explaining the feelings that go through a person like a riptide effect. . . I'm glad its all okay for you now. I'm sorry about your grandfather. I know how it feels. Is this seriously a true story?
Raonaid Luckwell chapter 1 . 1/25/2002
This is a deep topic you took on {well to me that is}. Very well done I'm very impressed
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