|Reviews for Word Bank of Abstract Ideas|
| three.word.lies chapter 1 . 10/24/2008
wow, that is beautiful, and very very original. i love it.
| Written chapter 1 . 10/23/2008
[She dropped it then lifted it, letting millions of sentences break apart and rebuild themselves.]
wow, gorgeous line. it reminds me of a line from a plath poem (no offense if you dont like her, I know a lot of people dont): ["I shut my eyes and all the world drops dead; I lift my lids and all is born again."]
amazing, surreal ending. that is so awesome. wow.
and you aren't going to want me to say this probably, but the end reminds me of the lady of shalott (i know, there really isnt much similarity but...) when the lady sees lancelot and all her art is ruined.
random, but it's true. totally reminds me of it.