Reviews for He Makes Me
annayh44 chapter 1 . 11/9/2015
It was nice I enjoy reading it
Airhead chapter 1 . 7/5/2009
Aww, just AW.
SugarCraziiness chapter 1 . 7/3/2009
O.o I have never made a one-shot and you seem like you're a pro at it. I wish I could, but I can never get an idea good enough to pack it onto one chapter. Mine always have to be dragged on. T.T

paraNormal chapter 1 . 6/29/2009
very cute :)
Hazelnut Romance chapter 1 . 5/16/2009
random but cute all the same! good job.
blurrylights chapter 1 . 12/23/2008
This was so sweet..:) J'adore.
Lian Bynum chapter 1 . 11/29/2008
This is so cute! I love the huge variety of all the things he does to her, but in the end, it doesn't matter because she loves him and he loves her, so it's all OK.

Sakurelle chapter 1 . 10/25/2008
Awesome! It was very sweet.
Hopelessly Cliche chapter 1 . 10/24/2008

Finally missy! I've been waiting for a oneshot from you for ages! Literally! lol

Aw, but this was so cute! I love how you wrote it all starting with 'he makes me'! -squeals!-

Anywho, loved this! Write moree! :D


Big Boots Man Of War chapter 1 . 10/24/2008
aw thats so cute, i loved it.
pinkguppie chapter 1 . 10/23/2008
Wow! It was so cute! And sweet!

Very well written :D

NattyAwesome chapter 1 . 10/23/2008

I really liked that.


Great job!
trying chapter 1 . 10/23/2008
Wow, my life is kind of like that too... except we lost our love along the way.

I really like this, and how repetitive the 'he makes' are. It flows nicely.

Just to critique, I think the line "when he sees something innuendo-y on anything he sees." would sound better if you used a different word for 'sees' the first time, so you aren't using the same word too much. :) But that's just constructive critisism, I think it's fine the way it is.

Anyway, bottom line: I like this. :D