lovee (:

I like this one. You actually could take the plot for this and expand on it, if you wanna. :)

good!

Good day. :) Hey, there twinny! I like this a lot. I don't have much time on my hands to read the rest but i promise i'll read it some other time. Good work! you're doing good.

Of Roses and Thorns - You have a future in writing.

I like the ambiguity of this. It makes it feel like this could be anyone anywhere, which makes it really relatable for the reader.

However, I didn't like your use of ellipses (...) To be frank, they were annoying, excessive, and unnecessary.

Decent work overall, though.

not bad but i'd like a little more detail