|Reviews for A dream in one summer night|
| swamp13 chapter 1 . 1/2/2011
| StarrburstNoodles chapter 1 . 11/12/2008
I like this one. You actually could take the plot for this and expand on it, if you wanna. :)
| fallen vampire chapter 1 . 11/10/2008
| IeatmyToothpaste chapter 1 . 11/1/2008
Good day. :) Hey, there twinny! I like this a lot. I don't have much time on my hands to read the rest but i promise i'll read it some other time. Good work! you're doing good.
Of Roses and Thorns - You have a future in writing.
| dragonflydreamer chapter 1 . 10/23/2008
I like the ambiguity of this. It makes it feel like this could be anyone anywhere, which makes it really relatable for the reader.
However, I didn't like your use of ellipses (...) To be frank, they were annoying, excessive, and unnecessary.
Decent work overall, though.
| K. Molle chapter 1 . 10/23/2008
not bad but i'd like a little more detail