I remember reading this when you were posting it, and I guess I just gave up on the story since the updates never came. But I hunted it down recently to see if there were any new chapters, and sadly there isn't. I feel like the quality of fictionpress stories has gone way down, but stories like this still stick in my mind years later. I don't know if you ever intend to finish it, but I would love it if you did.

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hehe well done is this the ending? Well pitty it was such a good story i could read on for ages... I liked Toms trickiness and those two playing around. The ending scene of this chapter is really good but damn i want more! The beginning of the Chapter was good and funny to me. Its a good point to end it with this chapter but also might be room for some more...but your the writer you decide. honestly well done, i enjoyed reading this and i will read the new chapters on off the cretan track sometime soon.

I like this chapter! I like how Tom has proven to be sensible. The endng of the chapter proves how much they feel for each other and how special this relationship is for Tom. And all of that without being sappy and all that, Bravo-Zulu. I liked it also when she teased him. Well and i liked that they were sensible at the beginning of the chapter and took a taxi. The talk between them both about sleeping with each other is good also, i like how they talk about their problems. One chapter to go...well off to the ending. Well they both still have to say the "L"-word.

hehehe! Smart Tom! Oh Steph, you have been well and truly been tricked! But oh steph not being reminded about the kiss...that is goint to so give him the wrong signal...that youre not interested in him. I liked Bricks "speech to his troops", it was a good one, in real-live it would definately been moving. And i do get the idea that he told Steph to go ahead and write the story. But im confused...simon loves steph but he and pippa are so comfortable around each other...well they should get together if they are not. And he is a good guy, a good friend to Steph.

Haha! well done! This chapter is funny aand romantic. Hope that stays that way until the end. I really liked the chapter ending and especially the Collegues singing the idea is really good. The poker game was just plain funny, especially when Tom bluffed Brick. Ok excuse me for being dumb but i finally got that pippa and simon are together...well that would be another interesting story dont you think? The beginning of the chapter got me thinking, with Brick giving her away...got me thinking of a marriage scene would he walk her down the aisle? Since she got an a lot better relationship with him than with her father.

This last chapters have been increasingly funny, i really like them. In this capter it was especially the Steph quote: "Sir we cordially invite you..." it made me crack up! Reminds me of a similar quote done by my cousin when she was drunk. And 30 to 1 that Brick has realized how drunk she is! I also like Simon and his input in this chapter. I also liked the scene with both of them being alone and toms stuttering and not getting it out right. Well more like Stephs condition preventing that. Pippas input was well done and well liked by me. Well done and sorry about the last chapter...the browser just crashed.

Well finally got some time for reviewing again...finally got to chip off some time from processing photos...shot a load of them while on vacation and on an airshow after. nearly one thousand pictures. Well i liked this chapter very much, it really made me grin, especially the quoting scene. Shame on you Tom for not recognizing this quote, it was done by Winston Churchill, and its one of my favourite speeches of all time, the way it was said its just great. When we flew battle of britain simulations with our simulator games i always wanted to fly for the RAF, and in every campaign this speech was one major motivation, even though im german. Also liked the scene with the whiskey at the beginning. The talk between the girls was an interesting bit and well written. The "isnt she gorgeous" comment made me grin happily Tom is such a goner for Steph. Well in the girls talk...i thought something bad mustve happened to Steph in the past for her to have such trouble in admitting her love for Tom. Well the scene with the cognac is funny also...cognac is fine...but strong. And now the review tool is driving me mad because it always tries to delete what i write when i stop

Ha ha ha wow.

oh, that tom is such a cheeky devil lol. it's sexy lol. anyways, can't wait for the next chapter!

Hmm i definately liked the chapter. A good man to man-conversation. Well written and realistic. And yes if you woman start chatting one cant get a word within. Simon is a great guy, hope you give him some luck in love. It comes good accross that he is concerned about Steph. Short but good is this chapter, liked the ending with Bricks thoughts.

What the hell? it wasnt brick? you got me completely fooled. Hmm if barker really keeps quiet? Liked that scene where they got rid of Dan. Well written. Also liked the Tom and Brick scene. I also liked the Conversation between Steph and Pippa, it gives more insight to what happened between steph and Dan and shows one of the problems Steph and tom have, that they havent really talked about their feelings for each other. The bit with Barker was funny. Bravo Zulu for this chapter!

Who is the only one civilized enough to drink whisky? Brick! so it was Brick who caught them! Uff Dan is out of the window, now after what Steph said, i like him even less. Well its good that you make Tom a bit insecure, because it seems like a first time for him, a first real relationship. It also gives him more depth. I also liked the part where they got into a fight because he was uncomfortable to say the truth, it seems realistic. Hehe i like tom being funny in the end. Well another good chapter, Well done!

Who Caught them? Brick of course! Muahaha! Yes i LIKED That!*evil laug* Hehe the ending of this chapter is just great, toms file is just classic! Chapeau! Hmm poor tom he has to wait a little more. They got away quite lightly with stealing his whisky. (aah wisky such a tasty drink! need to head over to the irish pub sometime soon.) Good chapter, i liked it very much!

i'm glad he finally admitted it to her. even if she is asleep lol. can't wait for the next chapter!

Yay! At least he told Stephie how he felt, even if she was asleep...

~Lillie