Reviews for A Dangerous Affair |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Oh... Good cliff hanger to end the chapter with! I am really enjoying this story, please continue writing! ~Lillie |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow cliffhanger i wana kno who her father is. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha Tom is so funny! hehe I somewhat get the feeling that Stephs "boyfriend" isnt a real boyfriend...more a bit of her thoughts to get tom off her back or more a choice made of convenience. Ah I just thought what? she is letting them do the deed already? Poor Tom only a dream. The scene where he lets her know what he dreamed is funny. The dialogue is great as well, especially the "Tom your not my father" and his answer to that, he is very witty. hehe a good and funny chapter. Now, I am curious if that boyfriend of hers is going to show up or to show that he is not existing! And if he is going to show up his reaction to Toms presence...i smell a funny scene. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You really threw me for a loop in the last chapter with Stephs boyfriend...does she have one or is it simply said to put Tom off? Good chapter, i liked the scene with them both in bed it shows that tom is in for more than just sex and steph simply cant resist him much longer. A very sweet scene. Good work im off and i will read on later. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good Chapters i really liked them! Sorry for not reviewing earlier but i was reading a very good book by Jonathan Tropper. So let me give you a big belated cup of enthusiasm-juice! I really liked the scene in her bedroom with stephie freaking out and tom helping her, you could really feel the tension between those two. In teh last cahpter i likede the bathroom scene...stephie likes to play with fire, she just dont realizes that fire can burn you...in the best of ways that case. Good work i really liked those two chapters. greets Lupus |
![]() ![]() ![]() That's just too adorable, and I honestly think that the two of them needed this intimate moment together without having sex. It proves to be much more powerful this way, at least I think so. Love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was beyond amazing. You did a really great job with this chapter. I loved how sweet Tom was and Stephanie is finally opening up. Can't wait for another update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() haha! that was cute. (: |
![]() ![]() ![]() so sweet |
![]() ![]() ![]() intensely beautiful. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ah,, every chapter makes me go weak. ;3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() im intrigued. wow. |
![]() ![]() ![]() danm,, that was sizzling. haha |
![]() ![]() ![]() So I read them backwards, but Tom is still cute. You wouldn't leave. I have a crush I admit, Steph needs to wake up and smell the roses though. Loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Go Tom! I just fell in love with him. He is beyond cute, that is so what Stephanie gets. So can't wait for an update. |