Reviews for A Dangerous Affair |
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![]() ![]() ![]() lol - Toms nice and funny |
![]() ![]() ![]() Crazy! I loved it. Seriously can't wait for the next chapter. The only thing I am curious about is if it was just shots or being shot at. Great chapter Bev! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know, I'm the worst reviewer ever, but I'm all caught up now. This chapter was so awesome... I love the chemistry between them and how they both are amiably trying to fight their attraction to one another. I can't wait to get some more or this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So I am in love with these two, they are so cute with each other, I love that she has no problem arguing with him. Her determination is very admirable. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Score one for Tom! Yay Tom! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Quite nice, so far. I like how you've created your characters and have given them multiple dimensions. Although it appears that you're trying to create tension between Stephanie and Tom, you also create what seems to be a competition for dominance and complications during partnership; something much deeper. Can't wait to read your next chapter ]. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hm. The blurb sounds a lit like Welcome to Crete, but perhaps my prejudices were wring. I am not sure. I will read on as soon as I can, but am a tad busy. I like the penultimate paragraph though. Nice touch. ~Lillie |
![]() ![]() ![]() The story is amazing and the sexual tension between the two of them is so thick you could cut it with a knife. Love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love him, he really is awesome. She knows what she said now so the sexual tension is going to get worse. Yay sexual tension. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay. I loved the closet scene! It was totally awesome. Great update. I think Tom got hotter in this chapter. Most definitely |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh man that was awesome. Tom is totally hilarious I can't believe he pulled that in front of Carlton and he asked Stephanie if she liked him when she was all strung out. Update soon, I can't wait for Steph to tear into him. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ..wow. This is amazing! Really, I love it. I havent found anything this well written on fictionpress in forever. you're an awesome writer... please, you gotta update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh wow, I love it. It's so amazing. Really great job so far. Tom is so cute. I can't wait for the next installment, I'm waiting with bated breath. |