Reviews for A Dangerous Affair
LupusAries chapter 58 . 2/1/2009
more shots? was there a firefight? was i wrong about the sniper...i really like this look beneath bricks hard shell. Brick is like an uncle or second father to her isnt he? Youll still keep the details of what happened to her under wraps...so mean.
Izzey chapter 60 . 2/1/2009
absolutely marvelously magnificent three chapters! loved them! please update again asap!
Sashtell chapter 60 . 1/31/2009
ha ha ha ha lol thank goodness she is okay. he really wants to have sex with her huh? lol i bet shes going to have give up and give in already Update reall soon. i cant wait anymore.
Sashtell chapter 58 . 1/31/2009
aw
Sashtell chapter 57 . 1/30/2009
UHM WOW...UD real soon now im think im about to get a separation...:(
Sashtell chapter 56 . 1/30/2009
oh...WOW
Izzey chapter 57 . 1/30/2009
oh my god! please update again asap! i can't believe they all got shot. please update asap! i really wanna know what happens!
LupusAries chapter 57 . 1/30/2009
What? Stephanie is Shot? Youreally put the drama on the high burner, mdeer. oh the tension will she be able to get to tom in time...will she survive? Well i think so, wouldnt be much of a story if she diddnt. But how will they get Carlton now?

From what it seems he probably got a sniper-team somewhere in the woods, probably semi-automatic rifle from the succession of shots. Because if get the scene right its to far for a simple pistol and because jack was hit in the head...a assault rifle isnt precise enough on farther ranges...just me thinking.

I imagine Stephs father will be royally pissed, at her and at Carlton...well i dont want to stand in his way now...
LupusAries chapter 56 . 1/30/2009
mhm so Tom has some kind of gang past? And some people of his past have ties to carlton? Hmm most interesting, lets see what happens when Steph arrives there with samantha.
CorvaCarolina chapter 1 . 1/30/2009
Looking forward to reading this!
LupusAries chapter 55 . 1/30/2009
Damn what is up with them now? You surely keep the drama on the high burn. Post new chapters soon i will read...dont think i could not with how interesting this story has become.
LupusAries chapter 54 . 1/30/2009
What the hell is Up with Tom? and who is making what demands of him?
LupusAries chapter 53 . 1/30/2009
The scene with brick is funny...im sure he suspects something now. hehe the park scene is funny tom acting a bit oddly and carefree. The end is romantic...i like it.
LupusAries chapter 52 . 1/30/2009
Hehe That chapter was funny...i like how it was lighthearted and funny. I like how tom tried to seduce her, it was funny to read and well written. You portray the chemistry between them very good. Well done.
LupusAries chapter 51 . 1/29/2009
hehe this chapter was good. I really liked the phone call it was really funny. So Tom to say that with the resignation.
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