this is a fantastically amazing story. i love it! please update again asap! i love the tension between them and just everything! please update again as soon as you possibly can! i'll be waiting impatiently!

woahh! haha its a good story so far

So the whole necklace scheme was a way for Henry to get Stephanie, am I right? I just don't get why he wanted to get her in the first place? I'm just a bit confused, and I hope you don't mind clearing things up for me.

Love the action in the story! Great!

''He stroked her hair and breathed in her scent and held her so tightly, as though if he let her go he’d die. He felt like he’d been suffocating for the last couple of hours, he needed her like he needed air to breathe.''

aww that was so sweet. wow this really intense. is he really coming after her and tom?

wow tom and stephanie seem to have lot of attraction and tension towards each other. But tom is funny and stef sounds like a very sophisticated person . She is trying to fight her feelings for him but its getting harder and harder for her. Tom well he knows what he wants . lol We all know his attraction for her is out of sight.

Definitely didn't see that coming. I loved the kiss it was soo cute, you you an awesome job with chapter! I can't wait for the "rain check".

Aha Steph we knew you wanted to kiss tom and now you got the perfect excuse. Good work on that Steph outsmarting Tom, I never saw it coming. Good work on the kiss scene, good transfering of the tension. Worst timing of the dark haired lady. Steph herself was tricksing by asking tom...well knowing he wouldnt deny her.

go stephanie! haha

yayie

thank you for the chapter!

I love Tom, he is beyond cute. These chapters were amazing and I can't wait for them to find this necklace. Great job with the casino scenes. :)

Oho this bet is interesting, but i somehow get the feeling that tom isnt going to win...not enough buildup right? But this guy, why is he stalling them...is he working for one of the Carltons. The Seargent must be "extremly happy" to see both stephanie and Tom. I guess the next chapter is going to be interesting. Are we back to welcome in Crete days, a chapter a day? Good thing if it is. Good chapter this one was!

aha! an explanation for Stephs early coming home! Hmm all free for tom! Good chapter even if i dont like gambling! But hey Steph and Tom got the most powerful ally in the world...You the writer! Wait did steph say prentence? As in Pretending something to their parents? Everytime we think something is explained good, you throw in some new secret.*sighs but grins*

Good chapter! I really like their interactions and dialogues, its good fun to read. What a pity i thought you will give us some insight on Stephs family. Hmm i dont like her fathers influence, but i would have liked to see more of her family. Stephs background seems very interesting, maybe she is from the upper class? Is the newspaper job part of some sort of rebellion against her father? Im off to read on

Seemingly more of a filler chapter but nonetheless. I like their different tries at getting informations. I think tom is right about that boyfriend...somethings strange about him, is only stephanie not really in this relationship or is he too? Im off to read on.