Reviews for Step Outside |
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We Used To Wait chapter 1 . 9/11/2009 "...He called out casually as me and my best friend..." It's supposed to be "best friend and I." "She flashed a weak smile. . . A little more evident these days." Instead of using "she" all the time, use Ashley. "She" was getting too repetitive. Um, after those i just stopped finding mistakes. Too lazy. But yeah, just wanted to help you out. Peace! |
Creative Destruction chapter 17 . 9/6/2009 Random comment! I used to go to church with Tyler Hilton before he became famous-ish! Haha. So random! |
mells chapter 20 . 8/31/2009 loved the chapter :) And to answer your question i do not have twitter. keep up the great work! x |
FailingFair chapter 20 . 8/30/2009 I really like this story. I really like Matt. So it's too bad that he and Christine are in love-ish. I have a twitter. :D |
Geminiwriter93 chapter 20 . 8/30/2009 Awesome update loved it ;) |
AlphaBeatKayGee chapter 20 . 8/30/2009 Jeeze. Matt was..quite kind in this chapter. Poor Shelly. I swear she's always getting hurt. Something good will come to her..eventually. I have a twitter...yeah it would probably be good to get one, not that serious though. Glad you found time to update! I was so excited when the email came. Anyhow, hopefully another one comes! |
funnechick chapter 20 . 8/30/2009 Matt is awesome as always. It just sucks that he doesn't know how much him being his amazing self is hurting Shelly. Hmm...she seems to need some type of distraction from him. Because with the way everything is going, her feelings for him will just keep getting deeper and deeper. |
bleuskies chapter 20 . 8/30/2009 I loved this chapter so much I can't stop smiling XD Haha! Shelly...Id feel the same way if I were her..Why fall for such a guy?..Anyways this chapter was so much fun to read! I've been waiting and I was so happy to see this! :D Matt is so sweet but..I also wish he would stop being such a ncie perfect guy with Shelly :P Carson would make a good friend. Btw about the picture its sorta cartoony picture and my friend said it was ugly but I dont know why but it seems like Shelly to me XD It doesn't really though and Matt also looks different..And did I mention I loved this chapter? XD haha. Cant wait for the next chatper Good luck in school :) |
mells chapter 19 . 8/25/2009 aw! more please! loved this chapter :) add more soon. x |
ShrimpoJewels chapter 19 . 8/24/2009 Every guy seems to like Shelly...but then you put them with other people...Cody and Matt... But I do like this Carson kid, that would be a cute couple :-) |
psycho angel chapter 19 . 8/24/2009 this was good, i mean really, really good. You cannot imagine the joy i felt when i saw that you updated. Carson is a really great guy but i still want Shelly to end up with Matt... update soon please! |
funnechick chapter 19 . 8/23/2009 Aww...I'm really starting to love Carson. That's a good and talented guy. I don't know if the next chapter is going to show a continuation of the night, but I would love to read about their slow dance! I'm really glad Ashley showed up at Shelly's performance. It's good to know that even though they don't hang out as much as they used to, Ashley still cares and came to show her support. Hanging out at the river with Matt, Christine, and her friends should be interesting. I hope Shelly doesn't feel like too much of a fifth-wheel. |
bleuskies chapter 19 . 8/23/2009 Haha I was totally cheered up by this update. I felt so happy when I saw new mail from FP XD I really enjoyed this chapter as always Good for Cody. Ashley and Shelly..Im really glad Shelly can have the best friend that everyone needs. Carson is so adorable XP I hope Shelly gets a good guy *wink* haha! Btw my best friend, she drew a girl but made her fat and when i saw it I thought she really looked like Shelly maybe a bit and so i asked her to draw Matt :X Now shes done and well I wish we could show you the picture XD Terrific job as always! :)Cant wait for the next chapter! :D |
AlphaBeatKayGee chapter 19 . 8/23/2009 Update! I was so giddy when I saw the bubble scroll on my phone with "Step Outside" on it. Carson is adorable! I hope he has a crush on Shelly. That'd be awesome. And so would a weekly update. Ashley..everyone needs to find themselves i guess. So uhh... until next chapter! |
ShrimpoJewels chapter 18 . 8/19/2009 You keep throwing me off with all these guys...I would die if I were her cause I would have a crush on all these guys and half of them seem like they like her. What she said to Manny was priceless. |