Reviews for Step Outside |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Well there might be a possibility of that but he must not know for then he will pity her and stop hanging out with her and that would be just sad. I really love Matt's character and i hope you can update soon enough. You are doing an awesome job, keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just fell completely in love with Matt's character...again. The way he is in the story is so alive and full of life. I just want to bottle it up and keep some for myself. Thanks so much for updating and your doing a great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh god, I am so happy about this chapter! It was so awesome again! Well, I hope Matt doesn't know...That would be sort of bad for Shelly. But I really liked what happened here. Aww I hate school even more now...D: I cant wait for the next chapter! I'm totally ecstatic and excited yet sad that you can not update anymore thanks to school...But keep up the great work! Really love this story :D It has TONS of potential! Terrific no wonderful no absolutely awesome job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Manny is an ass. He's not worth it if he can't even admit to his friends he likes her. He could've at least said something like we're just friends and not completely be an ass. Great chapter ending D I very much enjoyed this chapter ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dude...no idea who she's best paired up with. I don't think Matt though... Great chap! I'm glad she's doing the church gig _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was NOT nice of Manny. She can't be happy with a guy who can't accept the fact that he likes her to his friends. That's a blow to the ego. As for who she is better paired with; I think it is Matt. I just loved it when he was so concerned for her. Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOW! I love this story! its really different from most teen romance stories :) please write more as soon as you can! x |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bah! I just looked at who you thought all of the characters looked like, and it surprised me that I actually recognized some of them. ;-; And, just be coincidence, I actually rewatched The Covenant yesterday with some of my friends, which is kind of freaky. P But I really like this story! 3 It's sweet, and I think that Shelly's life is a lot better than she thinks it to be. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah I've been waiting for this Clicking on my story alert every few hours XD I really really enjoyed this chapter :D It was utterly unbelievably awesome Manny...he was different from what I thought. But it's cool to catch glimpses of Travis again. Matt again...that was quite obvious but I don't mind it at all :) Keep up the great work! She's completely fallen for him huh? I've changed my mind about Manny..Maybe Matt is good..But I kinda want a new different dude..nicer and sweeter and not afraid to express his feelings..oh sorry about rambling on. Love the chapter! Cant wait for your update |
![]() ![]() ![]() Quick update! Manny...that chicken. I don't like him too much anymore. OoH! I hope they drive by the party and she goes inside past Manny to tell Cody that she's got a ride and gets back on and goes on a journey! I was wanting this to happen for the whole ending soo much. Hopefully you can get out at least 2 more chapters before the week is over. I would be so ecstatic. Anyhow I'm glad she's becoming more comfortable with herself. Manny's just a jerk. Updaye soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very good story, I hope to see an update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! I totally squealed when I saw you updated I LOVE IT SO MUCH! XD Thank you so so very much for updateing :D It was utterly AWESOME!CANNOT wait for the next chapter Ahh so interestin now..Its gettin to the good part..OMG I haven't read this since so long I have no idea who carson is O.O I SHALL REREAD IT! Haha XD Thanks a bunch for this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I reallyy liked this chapter. Sometimes when authors don't write for a realyy long time the comeback chapter sucks. And this didn't. Christines friendsare a lot better than her past friends..or friend. I love how they're making her come out of her shell. Carson sounds like a new friiendd. I wish you would update this without doubts because this is a very good story. So..on that note..update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, Christine's friends are so nice. It's crazy how different they are than Jake's (mostly) idiot friends. Although I do love Matt, Shelly really needs to try not to get in too deep with him...it'll only end up hurting her more if and when Matt and Christine's relationship gets serious. It already seems to be heading that way and probably will when they get enough courage to tell Jake the truth. I can't believe Shelly played for Christine's friends. I was so proud of her. I really hope she decides to do the Church festival thing with Carson, they seem to make a really great performing pair. Oh, and of course I was so excited to see this updated in my inbox. Now bring on some more! :) |