Reviews for Step Outside |
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Lea Brown chapter 12 . 8/6/2009 I like Matt but he's into Christine too Carson would be the perfect guy for Shelly till Matt realize he likes her. |
bandgirlz chapter 11 . 7/7/2009 All right, I'm hooked. I just read Up to Me and everything you've written on this one straight through, and I love it. I have to say, though, Shelly's a pretty lucky "fat" girl. She seems to have a lot of guys after her, but she doesn't notice. Hm, I guess maybe that's truer than we'll ever know. Well, if you're looking for votes, I'm all about Shelly Cody (who seems adorable!). Travis lost his luster, Matt is perfect in the wise surrogate older brother role, and Manny, while intriguing, just doesn't have the same tug at the heartstrings right now. I don't know, maybe Cody's not even into her anymore, but I was so sure they were going to get together at the end of Up to Me! Okay, there you have it: I felt bad b/c I didn't review the whole way through, so you get all your reviews in one mad jumble. Please update! Keep it up, and I'll keep reviewing... |
jess chapter 11 . 7/2/2009 I love this story! The first one was me, like, my life. This one is amazing and so well written! I really hope you continue with the matt/ rochelle angle! Email me if you continue this! |
A Hopeful Smile chapter 11 . 6/7/2009 No! :( Shelly must love Cody! They'd be so cute together :3 No more Matt! (But I love him too...) |
Binenthorne chapter 11 . 5/30/2009 OMGOODNESS! Post soon, pretty pretty please? I wonder if Shelly and Ashley make up...and hang out more often...Wow, she loves Matt...I'm curious to know how that works out... ) |
Darke Shadow chapter 11 . 4/10/2009 M, I do love this story. I am so excited for all the possibilities the story has! I think the Ashley thing is a good change for Shelly because this opens her up for new opportunities and new friendships. My heard is pounding with anticipation! Keep up the awesome work and update soon. |
bleuskies chapter 11 . 4/1/2009 Awesome chap like always! XD Loved everything bout it :) PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon! :D Love your stories I think she should start to open up soon to somebody. I realy like Travis, Cody, Manny, Drew, and Jake. Awesome characters! Your really good so please keep up with the good work. I think its actually a good change for Ashely to leave her because Shelly needs to experience something new and im thinking she should be sad and open up to a special someone :) Sorry i talk a lot but theres even more i wanna say but ill wait till you write your next great chap! :P |
Diana chapter 11 . 3/31/2009 Yes update! After making us wait so long for and it was worth it. Matt and Shelly had a moment. Aww she's in love with him, but damn why why is he with Christine. Darn. About Ashley though. I think there is seomthing more going with her than just hanging out with other girls. Can't wait for the next update. |
psycho angel chapter 11 . 3/30/2009 man! did you make us wait or what? but seriously it was worth the wait though. so please keep updating |
clowneygirl chapter 11 . 3/29/2009 Cute story. I just found it tonight. I'm interested in seeing where you take it. I'd kind of like to see something happen with her and Matt. I think her sister comes off kind of witchy. I don't understand how her brother can let his friends talk about her like that either. My brother is the type that he'd knock someone's teeth down their throat for looking at me wrong let alone talk to me like Jake's friends did. I like Cody as her best friend and think he should stay that way. She needs to forget she ever met Travis. He's a flirty little playboy. Manny seems nice but kind of boring. I'm rooting for her to hook up with Matt but it seems he's with the sister. I don't know really what's going on there. Update soon. |
funnechick chapter 11 . 3/29/2009 Aww...Matt and Shelly had some moments! I can't believe he was the one to finally convince her to play one of her songs for someone else. I hope his encouragements convince her to open herself up a bit more. And I'm really glad you updated! Can't wait for the next one! |
MarloCarlo10 chapter 11 . 3/29/2009 Idk about Ashley man, I don't think she's trying to be mean, but maybe shelly and her just need to talk. Good chapter! |
Geminiwriter93 chapter 11 . 3/29/2009 Yay, I was so happy to find a new chapter for this story! I can't wait for your next one, I loved this chapter and I absolutely love Taylor Swift! |
CreativeChick233 chapter 11 . 3/29/2009 i liked it :) it was a nice change, i just wish she just kiss matt already! but it's too soon, :( update son, |
elanbu chapter 10 . 1/27/2009 So i wasn't intending to review because I'm not a member of fictionpress, but i've been reading some of your stuff...and...well, for starters. I feel like rochelle's stories are more fit to being YA, then romance. haha, and i actually mean that as a good thing. all of your characters are relatable and realistic, and the plot lines are dramatic, and yet not unbelievable. I love seeing stories that are well...Okay, I love the fact that even if your characters don't get the guy, they still get something out of the experience, which is why i consider your writing more of a YA-type. wow, my grammar is always horrible in reviews. Anyways, i'm surprised your stories haven't gathered more attention. they're sweet and you don't ramble or over-describe. So, good luck with your writing, i'll be keeping an eye on your stories. and keep it genuine! I love it! |