Reviews for Step Outside |
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I Quoth Nevermore chapter 5 . 11/23/2008 I don't know what you're thinking, but I ship Shelly/Cody. Totally! And the more potentials, the better. But a big brother type could be fun, you know, to spice up the 'trouble with dating' situation. That's my take anyway. Update soon! |
MarloCarlo10 chapter 5 . 11/23/2008 Hm jeez i dunno. What about cody? I think i personally like him... lol but who knows? Loving it ] |
CreativeChick233 chapter 5 . 11/23/2008 i see matt as a potential boyfriend ] and cody has a friend/brother type i dont think cody and shelly should get together... i dont even think shelly likes cody like that update soon! |
funnechick chapter 5 . 11/23/2008 Well...she's certainly not thinking of Matt in a big brother type of way, but I'm sure that's how he thinks of her. I really like their friendly banterings but I do hope that there's some actual romance between Shelly and a guy in this story...whether or not that includes Matt. The rest of the chapter was really good but there were a few typos throughout so you might want to go back over it and proofread. Oh, and longer chapters are awesome! |
predict.this chapter 4 . 11/23/2008 Hm... Why would Travis pick a new girlfriend called Rochelle too? Is that a hint? Haha. |
MarloCarlo10 chapter 1 . 11/23/2008 I have to say I like this story. Its like 4am and i just finished the Nessa series im so glad you updated because I think i almost gave up on this story [ Great job ] Man I jsut have to say your are awesome! |
funnechick chapter 4 . 11/22/2008 Ugh...I'm thinking I no longer like Travis. How could he break up with his girlfriend and already be moved on to someone else? And a girl with the same name? That all seems a little fickle to me. But anyway, I like Manny; he's pretty cool. And Cody, as always, is really sweet and a good friend. And it's interesting that Shelly felt so bad after not playing the guitar when it was offered to her. I hope she decides differently if she's ever asked again. |
I Quoth Nevermore chapter 4 . 11/22/2008 I didn't read your first story, so I don't know if Shelly is different in this one, but I love this. Just thought I'd say that. But why does everyone look at her when Miguel shouts that he wants to play next? I was a little confused cause there's no reason anyone should be looking at her. In fact, they should have looked at Miguel. Thought I'd point that out in case it was a mistake. Update soon! |
CreativeChick233 chapter 4 . 11/22/2008 nice update it was sort of boring though [ but i like the manny guy... and is it REALLY a coincidence travis new gf has the name rochelle too? hmm... |
CreativeChick233 chapter 3 . 11/22/2008 nice update! i think the next chapter should be the party ] |
I Quoth Nevermore chapter 3 . 11/19/2008 I like what you're writing so far. Not gonna lie, I thought Cody was going to turn out gay and be bf/bf with Neil. Haha. Sorry if that offends you. I just picture him really scrawny and such. But the story overall is great. It's nice to see a fic that the main character isn't your average "oh I'm so beautiful" or "I'm so ugly even though I'm secretly a supermodel." It's all about the beauty on the inside, and I think this story will have that. Okay, enough of me sounding like a flower child, Update soon! |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/19/2008 This is cutecutecute! I really like it because I have problems with my weight but I'm one of those bubbly outgoing girls, pretty much just like shelly. c: update! |
Godsmusician93 chapter 3 . 11/19/2008 Was the song Love Story from Taylor Swift's song? I love that song! |
Godsmusician93 chapter 2 . 11/19/2008 Good Chapter! |
sew.what32 chapter 2 . 10/29/2008 ooh i wonder what is going to happen in the next chapter! hopefully it has something to do with travis!haha and i liked this chapter but i got kind of confussed when she was playing her guitar and then suddenly she was in a ball game. It was kindof choppy. But other than that is was good! cant wait for the next chapter! update soon! |