Reviews for Step Outside
sew.what32 chapter 1 . 10/29/2008
Sweet! i like this sequel so far!

i cant wait to see what happens when school goes back in session! and this matt guy? a bad boy?

what about travis and cody? i kind of want travis and shelly to give a go at it! :)

and cody? whats he doing?

anyways i am glad that the sequel is out!

cant wait to read the next chapter!
angel breath chapter 2 . 10/27/2008
you stories are amazing! when will the next chapter come? please post soon
CreativeChick233 chapter 2 . 10/26/2008
love them as always..

when are u going to get a picture of matt?
funnechick chapter 2 . 10/26/2008
You know what's weird? I had no clue you were going to make Matt this "bad boy" but I still don't see it quite yet? Or is it that he just doesn't care about anyone's opinions and does what he sticking up for Shelly?

Gah, I still can't stand Jake and his friends...tough love...that's crap. But anyway, I wonder what Christine and Matt have planned...could they be setting her up? Is Travis going to be a big part in this story? Oh, and I'm so glad she's in softball-that's really awesome for her.

Well, I can't wait to read the next chapter! Update soon.
Geminiwriter93 chapter 2 . 10/26/2008
This sounds like a really good story so far. Can't wait to read the next part. By the way, how old are the people in the story? I'm guessing Shelly, Ashley, and Cody are in like 9th or 10th? And then Matt, Christine, and their friends are like Juniors or Seniors?
Geminiwriter93 chapter 1 . 10/26/2008
Sounds like an awesome story so far!
The Concept of Breathing chapter 2 . 10/26/2008
*happy dance*

I was waiting for this sequel :]]

but, i have to say i was a little disappointed when i realized that cody and shelly weren't togther...hmm, their gonna get together eventually right?

she likes him, she just doesn't know it yet!



i dont know about him, but that could just be b/c i like cody so much.


too early to say.

them together?

i like it, but again, that could just be b/c i like cody so much and i think he should end up with shelly.
Jessiquie chapter 1 . 10/25/2008
Hey. So happy that you've started posting the sequel! I loved the first installment! And can't wait to read this one!
CreativeChick233 chapter 1 . 10/24/2008
well im glad you FINALLY put the sequel up (:. Update soon!
Faded Soulfire chapter 1 . 10/24/2008
Wow, I really like this.

It's fairly short, but already I can empathize with Shelly and Ashley. And I can relate to them quite a lot. Matt seems rather interesting so far. And I think that what you've written so far is very believable.

What do I think about Shelly? Well, I like that she's shy. I also like that she doesn't pity herself over her weight. I like that she doesn't really care what people think about her, and it's refreshing to read about. I'm glad she has some level of self-confidence. So far, there's nothing that's bothered me about her.

Nice story you have here. I'll definitely be back for more.

Faded Soulfire
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