Reviews for Step Outside
TheWomanBehindTheMask chapter 29 . 4/27/2010
WOW! I AM SHOCKED speechless.

You know how after you've finished reading a really good story, and you get that feeling? That's what I have now. Loved it!
rebecca chapter 29 . 4/13/2010
awesome story :)
cherry1 chapter 29 . 4/9/2010
omg this story was just amazing.i mean i really FELT amazing...
danni-loves-too-reid chapter 13 . 3/25/2010
i dnt lik travis to much for her matt is col n i luv cody! um manny is also good oh n tht one guy she sang with!
danni-loves-too-reid chapter 8 . 3/25/2010
holy shizz at the manny part n haha at the cody part!
Accomplished Reader chapter 29 . 3/14/2010
I really liked this story :)

I can relate to almost everything in it and it really hit me emotionally. This story was so touching I actually cried during parts of it xD but its okay because I'm a sappy hopeless nerd so its expected. :D

I really wished you continue the story_ but I'm also happy with the ending. Keep it up!
Faded Soulfire chapter 29 . 3/9/2010
I started reading this story a long time ago. And until today, by a happy accident, I stumbled across this story. It's so hard to convey how much of an impact this story has made on me. I am overweight, just as Shelly is, and she is relatable and someone you can't help but like. I haven't done any reviewing in a long time because I am rarely on FP, but I wanted to pass along my thoughts. I really like how you handled the Shelly/Matt friendship situation, and how Shelly's sister wasn't jealous and mean to her because she hung out with Matt so much. I also like how Jake came across as indifferent, but you learn that's clearly not the case. I like how Shelly is a resilient character who is clearly far from perfect, but learns from her mistakes. It's empowering to see her take control when people mess with her - whether it's about her weight or something as trivial. I really enjoyed reading this. :)

I do wish it hadn't ended abruptly. I was hoping we'd see Shelly finally find someone. I guess ruling out the obvious choices would be Matt and Manny. I'll make a crazy guess...what about that Darrin guy? Because he's mute or doesn't talk or whatnot, it would be interesting to see what's going on with him. I wasn't a big fan of Carson to be honest, and deep down, I have to admit that I really like the idea of Shelly and Matt as a couple. Either way, can't wait to read the sequel.

Faded Soulfire
3DarkGoddess3 chapter 29 . 3/4/2010
Great story. I think she is amazing. She is so real and I can't wait for the sequel.
elanbu chapter 29 . 3/2/2010
i bet it will be travis!
ish chapter 29 . 3/1/2010
wow. just wow. i'm not really partial to reading shit online, but i couldn't really stop reading this. the ending was beautiful. great job. seriously Shelly's a great character and you're a great writer.
WhoDoesn'tLoveAWriterLikeMe chapter 29 . 2/21/2010
aw. i loved this story!
Jessiquie chapter 29 . 2/21/2010
okay so I have a slight confession to make - this epilogue actually bought tears to my eyes. It was fantastic.

Actually this whole story ws pretty amazing and I can't wait for the sequel - so glad that your thinking of one!
Jessiquie chapter 27 . 2/20/2010
This chapter is beautiful! I loved it. it's so sad, but so real on so many different levels. You did a superb job on it.

Reading that author note however, I feel sad since i know in my inbox is the notification for the next two chapters. I love this story, its so different and so much more real than a lot of things on this site. Its sad to know it almost over.
000000001.0 chapter 29 . 2/20/2010
Can i say props to you!

this is an amazing story, she really grew up and you could feel it through.

and for once the prince charming isn't who you expect it to be. and its bittersweet ending.

and well all in all

truly amazing:)
IDanceInTheRain chapter 27 . 2/20/2010
Can I just say how much I freaking LOVE Rocket Summer? It's awesome to hear about someone else liking them too cuz they're not well known. But yeah love them and love your story!
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