Reviews for Step Outside |
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RaNdOm PaNdAmOdIuM liVeR chapter 26 . 1/13/2010 i love ur story |
acatsrain chapter 26 . 1/11/2010 I read this and Up to Me today and I can see a major change in your writing. Up to Me wasn't hardly up to par with this one. I felt like that one was kind of a jumbled mess of words and this one feels much more like your coming into your own with your writing and finding your voice. I love when people find their voice and the voices of their characters because the words start to get easier and... I get weird when I talk about writing. Ignore me. Anyway, one thing I think you did REALLY well was describe Shelly's personality. She started off really self conscious and then she eased out of it, she didn't wake up one day and become full of herself. As for Shelly telling Matt about her crush... I don't really think she should. Maybe she can find a nice guy to make him over protective and find out exactly what he feels towards her. But with less intention to make him jealous and more need to feel wanted, of course. Sorry, I talk too much on reviews. And texts, phone calls with friends... I try not too but... I just can't help it. I hope to see you update. |
Jessiquie chapter 26 . 1/5/2010 Poor Shell! The ending to this chapter was heartbreaking. You wrote it so well, I fully felt all the emotion and everything. Great job! |
mels chapter 26 . 1/4/2010 aw! poor shelly :( i hope she finds a nice guy like matt too... :) |
tifferz92413 chapter 26 . 1/4/2010 I think she should totallt tell him how she feels. If not she's always gonna wanna know the what if's and all that. but nt only that sometimes all you need to do to make yu feel better is tell the person regardless of something comes of it or not. Matt doesnt seem like the type the would ditch her just because she told him how she really felt. in my opinion i think he would respect her more for having the balls to do it knowing that nothing would probably come from it. even though i hope something does :) |
Eyes of the Fire Lily chapter 26 . 1/4/2010 aw Shelly. :( I think she should confess her feelings to Matt. I feel sorry for Cody tho, cuz even though he likes her, she likes someone else and he hears her talk about him. That must suck. :/ Well I'm loving this story so far. :) please update soon! |
morphine and lollipops chapter 26 . 1/4/2010 Awh. Sweet. |
funnechick chapter 26 . 1/4/2010 I think I've said this before, but I don't think Shelly should tell Matt about her feelings for him. At this point, I think it would cause more harm than good. It would make things awkward for all involved and might even mess with some of the relationships (friendship and romances) that have been developed between Matt and Shelly and her family. Oh, and I hope you eventually have Francis get his. I don't understand how someone can find joy out of continually ridiculing another person because of their weight. I just really wish Shelly could punch him and knock him out, haha. At least I can invision him showing up to his 20th high school reunion 30-50 pounds overweight (with a badly receding hair-line) and in a marriage with a control freak who constantly nags him. Yeah, I like that image. |
WeFallForever chapter 26 . 1/4/2010 I wish Shelly would tell Matt how she feels, but at the same time, i can respect why she doesn't want to. Rejection really hurts, and that's what she's going to get if she tells Matt her true feelings toward him. Update soon! |
CreativeChick233 chapter 26 . 1/4/2010 I want her to, but then I don't think she should cause it might make it all awkward and crap. And I kinda like how it is right now. I think that you should set her up with some guy, and see if he gets jealous :) |
AlphaBeatKayGee chapter 26 . 1/4/2010 Oh man! Poor. Shelly! I think that there's more to that song tho. Btw I adore that sonng . Anyhow! Last chapter before school! This is going to suck majo . Let's just hope you're able to squeeze something out during schoolk! And nO she should not tell him! That makes everything awkward and just wronng. Personally , I think she should distance herself a bit until he gets fed up and confronts her about it... Or whatever you have planed'll work! Lol.. So until then - update soon! |
WeFallForever chapter 25 . 1/3/2010 This story is amazing! I wish Shells would just wake up and realize that she's special. Update soon! |
Jessiquie chapter 24 . 1/2/2010 okay so I have a confession to make, untill about five mins ago I'd never heard of the song 'Fast Car' by Tracy Chapman. But when people such as yourself mention a song in a story (even in passing) i always hop on youtube and listen to it as I read the chapter. So reading the song i hoped on youtube and OMG, all I can say is thankyou. This song is unbelievable! I love it. Definately getting the timeless nature of it! Chapter chapter by the way too. |
CreativeChick233 chapter 25 . 1/1/2010 I hope you get to update before school starts. Good luck! |
Wing Moon chapter 25 . 1/1/2010 OMG can you please just give the poor girl a guy already. I don't know I think Shells should just stay away from Matt. UPDATE! Also Happy New Year! |