Reviews for Step Outside |
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n chapter 25 . 12/31/2009 thank you for updating! it's amazing, as always. update again soon! |
Binenthorne chapter 25 . 12/31/2009 well, Matt obviously cares for her...but to what extent I'm still not sure about...POST SOON! ) |
Lea Brown chapter 25 . 12/31/2009 Sadly I would have to say that Shelly and Matt's relationship is best friends material. Because Shelly loves him and dreams of being with him but it crashes and burns because he's with her sister and he likes her as a friend.I don't know if you like lady gaga or not but Shelly and Matt's relationship is like a bad romance which was what lady gaga was describing in her lyrics how a person loves their best friend very much but can't have that is only my opinion of their relationship I really love this story and I can't wait to find out who Shelly ends up with. ) |
AlphaBeatKayGee chapter 25 . 12/31/2009 Their relationship is a little more than sibling. I'm not sure how to describe it but its cute. I always feel so bad for 4 shelly though, so bad. I do very much so hope for at least one more chapter! Thatd be amazing, so on that note... You know how it goes- update soon please. |
mels chapter 25 . 12/31/2009 loved it, more plzz. the relationship for him i think its friendly but he enjoys her company a lot and her personality. obviously the relationship is stronger for shelly. |
psycho angel chapter 25 . 12/31/2009 I Really want her to end up with Matt, but I don't think that she will be fully happy either coz then her sister will hurt. But i still want her to end up with Matt! |
morphine and lollipops chapter 25 . 12/31/2009 Omg, stayed up over an hour reading entire story. Awh, poor Shells. Travis should fall for her, and her be like, "Uh. No." Manny is GAY, psh. Cody likes Shells a lot, I'd be okay if he ended up with her, but him and Ash would be super cute, too. Matt and Shells romance is cute, but there needs to be a huge confrontation with them. I also can't see them together. Um, I LOVE Carson. Tons. No matter what. I think Carson likes Shells sister, though, huh. Update ASAP. |
AccountKiller2017 chapter 25 . 12/31/2009 omg! awesome chappie! loved it! does matt like shelly or does he like christine? cos sometimes i'm confused. at one moment he's like so into christine and at another, so into shelly..but still, insane awesome chappie! |
funnechick chapter 25 . 12/30/2009 Yay! That was such a fast update, very impressive. It's so weird, with Shelly and Matt, because I wanna see them hang out and have their little moments. But at the same time, I want Shelly to get over Matt and I don't think she can if she's constantly around him, especially when it's just the two of them. I also think, even if there was a slim chance that they could ever be more than friends, if (and I'm not sure if he's admitted this or not) Matt loves Christine, I don't think it could ever happen. But their friendship is awesome. He's a really great guy and a great friend. I'm so excited that Shelly is seriously considering singing publicly. That would be so awesome if it happens. Though I can't imagine how hard it'll be for her to put music to Matt's love song for her sister. That whole process will just be breaking her heart continually. Well, it'd be awesome if you could update one more time before the next semester of school but if you don't, I've really enjoyed reading all of your update so far during these holidays. Happy new year! |
Neener chapter 25 . 12/30/2009 Loved this chapter alot! I like how Shelly seems to act a bit more normal and casual around him now...Can't wait to see Shelly sing the song for him. Also can't wait for her next performance with Carson :) I'm still digging Carson and Matt all the way! :D It would be nice to see Travis again, though, no idea why. This chapter made me smile the whole time Keep up the great writing! Love this story so much haha. Btw, your covers for your Nessa series are very nice I like them. Especially the one with Jensen Ackles hahaha xP Will definitely be waiting for your next update! I would describe Shelly and Matt's relationship as a close friend/brother and sister type? The way they interact and talk with each other do give off a sort of more intimate relationship, if I may say so. CARSON! haha, totally digging that dude, for no apparent reason now XD Matt is cool too of course. Thanks for writing! :) Happy Almost New Year! -Neener (Arashiku) |
psycho angel chapter 24 . 12/30/2009 YAY! She should end up with Matt! Please put Matt in the next chapter, I miss seeing him around. |
David Bowie chapter 24 . 12/29/2009 I love love LOVE this story, dude! I don't think Shelly and Carson would have worked out anyways. Creative differences maybe? Lol. And I knew from the start Cody liked her! But I desperately wanna know what Matt thinks of her.. and the "dates" that they've been having ;) I feel sorry for Cody, though. It's like he knows he probably doesn't have a chance, or does he? :P I'm torn between them, honestly. The sweet, lovable best friend or the sexy, confident badass? Lol. Oh, and it's good to see a non-skinny girl dominating a young adult story. It's a good change :) since I'm a non-skinny one myself. Lol. |
AccountKiller2017 chapter 24 . 12/29/2009 please continue? :( i'm so hooked! |
mels chapter 24 . 12/29/2009 love, love, LOVED! the chapter :) update soon it was really good! x |
AlphaBeatKayGee chapter 24 . 12/28/2009 Ok okm matt next chapter! And wth! A sequel! It sounds great but because you don't update fast that might be a bad idea. !_( there has to be one if .att and 9helle don't end up together! 4 9arsons dream girl, I think I 'now who it is. Sorry if there's a butt load of typos in this. The screen is tiny and its not showing the words I'm typing... Don't question it. *nyhow! I hope you do update soon. (Hatd be amazing! I was quite giddy when - got this update! OK so bye theen! |