Your story is surreal! Awesome! :)

so my views on carson are the same, he still seems to rock basically. && I knew matt was feeling shelly...all along! i

Wow that was one interesting chapter :D I loved it! Matt and Shelly's relationship does 'intriguing' haha. Well, this chapter just made me love Carson. Hes such an awesome character and I would love to see him with Shelly more. Cody feelings were sorta obvious XD Not that I dislike Cody but I wouldn't want him with Shelly :P Matt wasnt in this one but good to see Travis again. I just wonder when Shellys gonna get over Matt since there are so many problems.

Carson! Carson! Carson! Im totally rooting for him after the interaction of this chapter...even though after reading this he may not be the guy for her and even though I dont like what he did to the girl. Anyways lovely chapter :D Cant wait to see whats gonna happen next!

Go Carson :P Haha Ive come to love him dont know why XD Go Matt too, because he and Shelly have an intriguing connection :D Thanks for writing! Cant wait for the next update :)

-Neener

Well, what Carson did to that girl was a very jerky move, whether they were casual or not. But I have no right to judge, so whatever. But I'm kind of sad that there won't be anything happening between him and Shelly.

Can I submit a request? Can you please have Shelly get together with someone in this story or the next one if you do make a third story in this series? I mean, not that I don't enjoy reading this story, but I think it'd be interesting to have her be with a guy and see what happens from there.

Anyway, I'm glad that she and Manny have kind of made up. And Carson agrees with me...Cody totally likes Shelly. And now Carson makes one more person that knows about Shelly's feelings for Matt.

In advance, I apologize for only reading the first two chapters! I've been busy and looking for a story that would catch my interest. Your story is great and I'll be back to read it all soon!

I love your characters just like everyone else because they are so easy to relate to!

The only thing I noticed (and it doesnt seem like you get much constructive critisism, no ones told you this) is that you love adverbs. I read a book called On Writing by Stephen King and he says adverbs weaken the story. And I think hes on to something. The reader will understand without the adverbs, it kind of makes you sound unsure about your writing. Just "I said" is perfect.

Thats all I saw! Love the story! I'll be back to read more soon! :)

wowz, i wonder ir she'll start liking Cody. That would be so cute...*sigh* Great to finally have another chapter! XD but yah, it is hard to get writing in when you have all this schoolwork and stuffz, but still glad you got something up!

Until next chap, Ciao!

i want more!

aww poor codyy!

great chapter tho. update soon!

Yay! An update!

Well, first off, Merry Christmas!

Second, that is so sad that Cody's all heartbroken. I hope he doesn't try to change himself just because of who his ex likes and who Shelly likes. I'm pretty sure that he liked Shelly before he got a girlfriend and that he still does...I wonder if anything will happen there? But really, I'd love her to be able to get over Matt, since that seems like it'll never happen, and give Carson a try-he seems much more attainable for her, especially given that he's actually single.

OMG! I was so happy when I heard you updated XD I really really enjoyed this chapter (: I was smiling throughout the whole thing XD Aww poor Cody ): I just CANT wait till your next update Love your story so much! I really do. Youre a terrific writer! Hope you keep on writing and writing more great stuff like this :D Anyways Im rooting for either Matt, Carson, or a new guy :P Haha. Everyone is all going for Carson and well hes starting to appear nice to me haha still love Matt hella lot but I know it'll be difficult for Shelly and it might be difficult to write..? maybe, just my opinion though. New guy, well I always love the new guys i guess XD i feel for Cody but he likes Shelly and she doesnt exactly like him back so thatll hurt later on :x although im not a Cody fan I hope he gets a good ending! Go Shelly and well Carson, Matt, or new guy XD HAHA.

Okay Im yapping and being random now But i cant help myself, I really love this story so much Will always be waiting for updates :D Cant wait! Good luck. Great chapter and thanks a lot for writing :) havent been able to read anything good since your last update and now this! :3 I should stop going on and on now, so goodbye!

Oh wait! Ah im using my new account so you probably dont know who i am...well, i think you can tell by my very long review ;; hahaha...Im Michi from Arashiku if you even know who i am...loved it as always! :)

~Neener (Michi)

I'm all for Carson and Shelly!

Haha I hate the Jo Bros but I will admit I have one song on my ipod by them ;)

I kinda hope she gets over Matt because I think even he liked her and dumped Christine for her, she wouldn't do that to her sister...at least, I don't think she would.

Good chap!

omg i love carson! he and shelly are so perfect! i dont rly think matt and shelly could ever work, it would ruin christine and shellys relationship as sisters. sorry about school :( update wen u can! looking forward to the next chapter and hoping for more carson :)

ahh! it's so exciting that you've updated again. i like carson, he sounds fun. whenever he's in the story, i can't help but see the guy in maria mena's video 'you're the only one' though..

Awesome update I loved it :D. I think Carson and Shelly are cute together but I still want Matt and Shely toether:P Update soon! :D

i loved it :)

i think carson and her are cute together..but i still like matt better :P

update soon!