|Reviews for Shortcut|
| CaveDwellers chapter 1 . 4/9/2009
ahahaha! The music cuts as he gets an ice-cream-it took me a moment to get that, but when I did I cracked up. I could totally see it all.
This is so hilariously anti-climactic. I would love to see this short film when you guys're done with it.
And just a side note, while these names are real they sound like they aren't, if that makes any sense. I just... they sound like you make 'em up. I love mainlander last names. :D
| IdeasInTheAir chapter 1 . 10/26/2008
Hi! Wow, this was great! I really really hope you put it on YouTube, I'd love to see it.) It was really funny, and I loved loved LOVED the middle part! And then the glowing background and the slow motion...this deserves a grammy, or an emmy, or a golden globe, or an oscar, or whatever kind of award this could possibly be eligable for. The only thing that was a bit "nyah" for me was the very ending with the 'pay up' thingy. I don't know, it seemed an eensy bit weak, but it's an easy fix I thinkeroo, I do I do. Haha, sorry, that made me laugh...Anywho, even if you just said something like "You owe me five bucks" or something, it may have been a wee bit better for me, because just saying "Pay up." Well, it's just two words, right? And I know that sometimes two words and have a huge impact on the world or the phycological presence or whatever for someone, but here...it was just like...two words. Anywho, that's all I have to say. I really hope you put it somewhere where I could see it once you do it, because I think it would be halarious to see!
A humungous three tiered wedding cake that explodes and bursts into a million smiles!
By the way, your website is pretty sweet, but I couldn't find the song Look on it.
| brilliantfusion chapter 1 . 10/24/2008
i laughed :D that must have been fun.
names were lovely as usual.
I OBJECT! :P
someone shoulda done that for caomhe and keiran's fight :(