Reviews for deflection
Baticul chapter 1 . 10/25/2008
Such a gorgeous piece. The imagery is fantastic. It has the qualities of a transcendentalist poem. Well done.
Isca chapter 1 . 10/25/2008
The first two parts were okay, but personally, I liked the last two sections the best. The third section is BRILLIANT! "Shit, it makes you humble." That was beautiful, especially if you think about homeless people and Sylvia Plath. I also really liked the imagery in the fourth section, with the sleeping earth :)

Great work!