I really like this so far. It has an excellent idea because it's so mysterious so you could go just about anywhere with it. I'm really eager to keep reading. Good job Zach.

"If eternity could be divided at all."

Most definetly the BEST LINE EVER WRITTEN!

okay...i've read this before but I'd forgotten but still good, still good...

O me likes me likes P

I shall continue me thinks lol

Awesome! Action packed and ineresting. That's pretty much it XD. I wonder who this woman he saved is...

Yay, it's back! I meant to review this story a while back and then I thought it got deleted. Ahem! I like Sam, he seems like a pretty well rounded character so far. I like the take on eternal life and how depressing it can get.

This

Is

Awesome.

This is very well written.

Especially the second chapter.

I was wondering-

Were you ever planning to explain why he can live forever?

nystate fair

Wow, found you story by chance.

This is amazing, I was totaly captivated by Sam and his plight. I'm really looking forward to reading more.

Plan on making time to read your other stories too :)

Rae.

My my my.

Such angst

such beauty

I really do like Sam, truly. He seems like a good guy, I feel for him.

Amazingly written

it's obvious you have a gift.

No typos, or errors I could see.

The thing I loved about this was that it was so to-the-point and no-crap style. I loved it, absolutely. This is going on my alert list.

I would love to see what happens next.

Once again, amazing.

~Luna Turner

WOW, that is really sad.

If I were Sam, and I couldn't be with who I loved...I'd...wow, i don't even know.

I'll be sticking by to see how this goies.

great job :D

Wow, great chapter! I like Sam, but Nick... Yea, I've only read one chapter but you're right, he IS an airhead! Andi is cool! I wonder what happened to Sam to make him live forever. It reminds me a lot of the Tucks in Tuck Everlasting. At first I thought Sam was a vampire, but I guess that's not it... Has he always been like this? Well, I guess that if he's been 22 for over a hundred years, he must not have been born like that... Can't wait to read more!

I have about a hundred thousand questions right now, one of which being why can't he die? This is a great chapter if you want a person to get hooked! I thought the preface was a bit short though. Yeah.

Unfortunately for the reader, however, this is a story that is not yet finished and I will be waiting excitedly for the next chapter. Write quickly!

So many questions i have! Questions that i know will be answered soon, but man, you seriously have a way of tugging in a reader! Awesome job!

So what is Sam's secret! how in the name of life did he come to be this way! Ack! Suspence!

Keep writing cuz this rocks!

Well i was utterly shocked to see that The Dreamers had just VANISHED!

I read your oct 25th on your profile though and deeply understand. writing with a bunch of others can be tough! i know from experience...ill miss the story though...a lot...

Anyways, to this new story...Great start! What is he, a vampire? a werewolf? or is he just frozen in time? Sheesh so many questions! I just hope you continue this one because i want to read it! :) (haha not to sound pushy or anything...)

Keep writing 8Days.