|Reviews for Dance with the Devil|
| bluegamergirl11 chapter 4 . 9/12/2017
I know that as an author you can grow very attached to character names, but Alik and Alix are so similar that I honestly have a hard time telling them apart sometimes. For future stories, try to use more diverse names.
| xxxheartlandxxx chapter 17 . 7/23/2013
This was a very a good story. Alik was certainly an interesting character and I'm glad that Liz opened up to him eventually. All in all I'm very pleased with this story and will read it again.
| xxxheartlandxxx chapter 9 . 7/23/2013
Awwwww Alik and Liz moment!
| moscalover chapter 17 . 11/11/2012
I absolutely love this story and I'm crying at the beauty of it
You wrote down their feeling so perfectly, the reader can FEEL them, it just so wow
Congratulations on this amazing work
| R. Ficst chapter 4 . 10/31/2012
yup. re-reading this
| Nacht Graves chapter 17 . 9/19/2012
Loved this story! and i was listening to my ipod on shuffle and Unglued by Stereo Skyline came on, and it immediately made me think of Alik's behaviour when not with Elizabeth :) now everytime i hear that song, i think of this story and Alik's possessiveness
| SoundOfSight chapter 17 . 8/6/2012
WHAT THE FUGE! Is that the end?! That's not fair or even remotly okay! You need to start this story again!
| MatingInspires chapter 17 . 6/29/2012
| Clouded and Instincts chapter 17 . 5/20/2012
I absolutely LOVED this story!
| ilovepunks chapter 1 . 4/5/2012
Hey, started your story late yesterday, and I was that hooked I had to keep reading... all the way to 3:00 am! Good job it's the holidays, otherwise I would have been seriously sleep deprived at school haha! I really enjoyed this story, particularly Alik - what a hottie haha! It's rare when I stumble upon a really good supernatural story, and you pulled it off really well. So well done, and keep up the good work! :)
- ilovepunks xxxx
| R. Ficst chapter 17 . 3/25/2012
loved it : )
| OrangeKiss chapter 17 . 2/22/2012
Great job! Such a wonderful story. :)
| TheSweetAngel18 chapter 17 . 12/16/2011
hello! new reader haha so i wasnt there for the journey of ur posting the chapters but i read it all
just wanted to say that i like ur story...it was a little diff from others in the sense that elizabeth wasnt as rebellious about the relationship.
however, (thers always a however)...i found that u started alot of 'topics' (for lack of better words) in the beginning of ur story that i think u forgot about, or got carried away with the idea of finishing the story.
u had elizabeths friends introduced in the beginning n they seemed like they were a little important in her life, but possibly got bored with them? idk but even with alex and justin...they were somewhat brushed aside until the end a bit. if u wanted them gone, u could have made a senario that would take away the other characters...such as going on to school...but elizabeth couldnt cuz she had to work to support her sister n was taking a year off with alex and justin who were earning money to go to school.
with Alik i feel that there could have been alot more said about him, about his past. it was great when u mentioned the past with his mentor and how jesse killed him n all that n the timbit about his upbring...but we dont know how he got to that city..how he reacred when he saw elizabeth, or how n what he did to keep himself away from her for 2years. how did he meet doc, or derek, n the other girl demon...he kind of gave off the alpha male feeling, which made me think he was a higher powered demon. but then i got the feeling that he was just older n thats all that was special about him. maybe explain his status in the demon world n why the others followed his lead. ohh but good points about the living in small groups. i liked that part.
but i do love the sister relationship u were building that was good. especially when doc said that he was trying to get rid of their bond. (i think u did a great job with his character he gave me the creeps)
i think u have a great skeleton of a story with some meat to it...so what i would suggest is that u go over your story and see what details u can add to make it more realistic, and to bring ur characters to life. give them all a history, a connection to one another.
but agian i still think this was a good story.
hope i did not offend.
| Ray-Anne chapter 17 . 12/8/2011
It was odd that the climax and solution ended in three chapters... I felt this could be elaborated a lot more. Though I have no qualms with it either. It was a nice story
| Destiny1406 chapter 1 . 10/8/2011
Loved the first chapter :) a few spelling errors but other then that it was good!