Reviews for Dance with the Devil |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Really enjoyed the story. Thanks for sharing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Elizabeth was able to resist her mate's bonding bites. I think it could have been nice if she was able to resist Jess's charms too as she hates him while reaching the end. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Alex and Alik look more similar names.. |
![]() ![]() I really loved this story. I love the supernatural take to it and it was definitely a very good read. I couldn't stop myself from reading. Though, I feel the ending could have been longer or wished there was an Epilogue. However, it was really amazing and thank you so much for sharing it with us! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know that as an author you can grow very attached to character names, but Alik and Alix are so similar that I honestly have a hard time telling them apart sometimes. For future stories, try to use more diverse names. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a very a good story. Alik was certainly an interesting character and I'm glad that Liz opened up to him eventually. All in all I'm very pleased with this story and will read it again. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awwwww Alik and Liz moment! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely love this story and I'm crying at the beauty of it You wrote down their feeling so perfectly, the reader can FEEL them, it just so wow Congratulations on this amazing work |
![]() ![]() ![]() yup. re-reading this |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved this story! and i was listening to my ipod on shuffle and Unglued by Stereo Skyline came on, and it immediately made me think of Alik's behaviour when not with Elizabeth :) now everytime i hear that song, i think of this story and Alik's possessiveness |
![]() ![]() ![]() WHAT THE FUGE! Is that the end?! That's not fair or even remotly okay! You need to start this story again! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Enjoyed this |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely LOVED this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, started your story late yesterday, and I was that hooked I had to keep reading... all the way to 3:00 am! Good job it's the holidays, otherwise I would have been seriously sleep deprived at school haha! I really enjoyed this story, particularly Alik - what a hottie haha! It's rare when I stumble upon a really good supernatural story, and you pulled it off really well. So well done, and keep up the good work! :) - ilovepunks xxxx |
![]() ![]() ![]() loved it : ) |