Reviews for Dance with the Devil
MidniteLayce chapter 2 . 3/16/2010
Another intriguing chapter. ;) I love Liz's relationship with Jesse, despite having only read a few lines of interaction between them. She really trusts the dude, and I love platonic relationships between guys and gals. And Liz's inner workings are hilarious and interesting to read.

I do have to say that the repeated use of the 'F' word is more distracting than anything for me. That's just my personal opinion though.

I'm exciting to read ahead, especially now that Alik is coming over. *raises eyebrows up and down repeatedly with a smile* So here I go!

~ MidniteLayce19
MidniteLayce chapter 1 . 3/16/2010
Very interesting. *grins* The characters are all charming in their own way, and I'm itching to keep reading. I got chills during the last paragraph. lol Off to the next chapter! ;)

~ MidniteLayce19
Engx chapter 11 . 2/20/2010
I absolutely love it! 8D Alik sounds incredibly sexy and Elizabeth so endearing! :]] Update soon!
thefrogsareattacking chapter 11 . 1/15/2010
Like the story so far.

Thanks
baldwisl chapter 11 . 1/13/2010
I love this story it has a great plot and i love the characters.
Qatariyah chapter 11 . 1/3/2010
sO WHAT HAPPENS NEXT?
readaholicxxx chapter 11 . 1/2/2010
haha they finally did it!

Can't wait for more!
Ck90 chapter 11 . 1/2/2010
they are just so cute together, i probably said that alot but i can't help it!

HAPPY HOLIDAYS!
KnightsOfCydonia chapter 11 . 1/1/2010
Well, if you do ever decide to write that scene you have to let me know! I love how their relationship has changed. Elizabeth seems to have accepted him fully. Will that change their bonding thing? Like make it complete? Doc's little persuasion concerning Derek will no longer be effective either, seeing as Alik can now touch Elizabeth when he wants and how he wants. I'm very interested in seeing how things change between the demons themselves. I bet Alik is a lot more relaxed around them!

Can't wait for more!
mindless selfishness chapter 11 . 1/1/2010
i've never read a demon story before, but this one is awsome! love it! haha Alik sounds really hot. did you make up the demons, or did you look up some legonds?
heather.is.epic chapter 11 . 12/31/2009
YAY! they are progressing nicely! love it! can't wait for the next one :)
Verasque chapter 11 . 12/31/2009
Great chapter! It was nice to see more development on the demon technicalities, and of course, Alik/Liz is always such a treat. And P.S. 5th scene, there's a typo. I guess I forgot to mention it, but it should be "one breast", as opposed to "one breasts" :P
Gemma chapter 11 . 12/31/2009
Haha, YAY it was favabulous! Made my new year :P I love the relationship between Alik and Liz, it's not like any other stories, and trust me, i've tried searching for similiar storylines when i've read all the latest updates of this one. Thank you for updating! Keep it up. :D
akaCHEEKS chapter 11 . 12/31/2009
ah no wonder its titled, "I'll wtch you leave here limping" either for the guy who tried to cop a feel or for liz who just got sexed up all night long. haha
to fall or to jump chapter 11 . 12/31/2009
I think they are really sweet together! It was hilarious when he punched the guy! Update soon!
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