Reviews for Dance with the Devil
runwayx23 chapter 8 . 10/16/2009
I love, love, love Alik! He's so cute. I like that Lizzie's pretty brave and won't just go along with anything. Forgive me if you've already answered this earlier in the story, but how old exactly is Lizzie? I was guessing she's in her twenties because she's not in school or anything.

Not too much to go off of now, but I'm so glad to find a story with good grammar and well-developed paragraphs!

I really like your writing style. It's mature and not over-embellished.

Will definitely be following this story!
Haav chapter 8 . 10/15/2009
Ah, I am absolutely falling in love with Alik. He's such a lovable guy! :)

Continue soon please!
Lady of Confusion chapter 8 . 10/14/2009
UPDATE ASAP!
Verasque chapter 8 . 10/13/2009
You're welcome! It's always a pleasure to be able to see the chapter before everyone else :) I can't wait for the next part. Double date with destiny, much?
anon chapter 8 . 10/12/2009
AWESOME STORY
KnightsOfCydonia chapter 8 . 10/11/2009
AHH! I loved it! I'm dying to find out more about the demons! They're so mysterious! I love it! CONTINUE ASAP!
OoohLookACat chapter 8 . 10/11/2009
that Alik's slight desperation/love/want for Liz is cute :)

adorable, too cute, awesome haha

and le gasp!

tim is the younger brother of jesse

dun dun dun!

what a (perhaps un-) random coincidence!

can't wait for more

izzie
sherbetsi chapter 8 . 10/11/2009
Oh I like the way that this is going. Cant't wait til the next one.

Sian x
heather.is.epic chapter 8 . 10/11/2009
ohh trouble!loved it more please -
dreamercrys chapter 8 . 10/10/2009
Hehehehe... :D
kii chapter 8 . 10/10/2009
Wow, i love that you wrote this from aliks point of view. I have been dying to know whats been going on in his head~

This is great. update soon!
Dead Deactivated chapter 7 . 10/8/2009
:)
Dragracingqueen chapter 7 . 8/30/2009
This story is so great! Please continue soon, because I just read all of this in one sitting and now I'm pretty much addicted...so PLEASE _

thanks,

and btw, I thought this was very creative. And too bad Jesse is evil (it seems) cause he sounds like a hunk :D
artificial destiny chapter 7 . 8/28/2009
yay! they kissed!

pls update soon :D
artificial destiny chapter 6 . 8/28/2009
aw i love this story :D
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