| Reviews for Dance with the Devil |
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   gallowsCalibrator chapter 4 . 4/28/2009 Awesome story so far! Can't wait for you to update! ~Raven |
| heather.is.epic chapter 4 . 4/27/2009 more please - |
| INACTIVEACCOUNT5678 chapter 4 . 4/27/2009 I can't wait until there's fluff! That'll be great. Until then, I'll keep reading. And please update sooner if you can! |
| Ck90 chapter 4 . 4/27/2009 I can't wait to see how the events will unfold! I never really did understand her past. What type of demon is he? Is there a hierarchy of demons? |
| julialakewood chapter 4 . 4/27/2009 omg love this chapter. Update soon, please! |
| Elyssa Morales chapter 4 . 4/27/2009 Really interesting :) |
| OoohLookACat chapter 4 . 4/27/2009 i'm intrigued, this story is interesting and i'm addicted to it already this Alik is questionable but seems...sweet in a way or just really guilty maybe haha and Liz seems like she got caught up in something that she wasn't meant to get caught in which makes her all the more interesting to read about can't wait for the next chapter izzie |
| KnightsOfCydonia chapter 4 . 4/27/2009 Well... this was rather interesting. I know what you mean now when you said the tone has changed. I think I have to agree with you, but I also think it's changed for the better. This was pretty damn good. I like that Alik is so worried. Except, every time he did get worried, the bite mark came up. I couldn't help but wonder... if Liz were to leave, for any number of reasons, would he still go mad? Or since he's already marked her and stuff, would he be fine? I don't know... I was just starting to think that maybe he has his own reasons for feeling bad, and not that he actually cares. Then again, I'm probably thinking too deeply about this... Anyways, love it! Continue soon! |
| AppointedRLK chapter 4 . 4/27/2009 Nice, can't wait for the next chapter. Good job. |
| M.Bianca chapter 4 . 4/26/2009 this chapter was an improvement, I have to say! But be careful, don't make the big bad guy look too soft, it turns the story into the biggest cliche ever |
| MarloCarlo10 chapter 4 . 4/26/2009 Great chapter! |
| pinkeclipse chapter 4 . 4/26/2009 thanks for the chapter! |
| haav chapter 4 . 4/26/2009 Hmm... her past? Meaning... her parents? Shit, that'd be... bad. I like how worried Alik is around her, like he's scared he's going to mess up again and so he tries to seem calm. (shrugs) I dunno, that's just what I think anyways. I like it! No surprise there. Can't wait for some more! |
| d0rkifi3d chapter 3 . 4/16/2009 wow new story and you haven't even updated the old one :p not that I'm complaining cause I really enjoy this new one as well :D I'm guessing alik is a demon? / vampire since she feels pain in her neck? or maybe I'm just overthinking this as I've just sat through watching twilight with my friends haha anyways I like your new story its very interesting :D can't wait to read more |
| precious chapter 1 . 4/15/2009 well i loved it so story is really interesting and i can't wait to read the ending. |