| Reviews for Dance with the Devil |
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   Sabreal chapter 3 . 3/30/2009 Huh? *Stares at screen mouth hanging open, catching flies* You'd better update soon, missy. Argh! I've never actually wanted to THROTTLE some1 b4 EVA in my lyfe, but argh, my cat's in danger of it's life being taken away... Just kidding. i'm not that evil:D i just wanted to convey my need to read the next chapter in an *cough* appropriate way...which turned out to be not so appr. after all. Oh well. T says hello! (as in my cat..) Update soon! |
| HoPELeSS.RoMaNTiiC chapter 3 . 3/17/2009 HOW COULD YOU STOP THERE.?. THERE OF ALL PLACES.?. YOU ARE SO CRUEL.!. lol great work update soon im dyin 2 find out wat happens nxt.!. |
| NovelS chapter 3 . 3/15/2009 it is pretty good so far. update soon? |
| Follow.the.Path chapter 3 . 3/13/2009 I hope you update soon! i love this story! |
| dreamercrys chapter 1 . 3/11/2009 You asked if we noticed any grammar errors and I noticed one... You keep saying "pry" and I think you mean "probably" but your shortening it... It is just a little confusing...that's all... |
| dreamercrys chapter 3 . 3/11/2009 He bit her didn't he? Damn... Interesting start... can't wait to see how she reacts... |
| Twist Their Emotions chapter 3 . 3/11/2009 Sometimes what exactly is going on is a tad confusing, especially the scene where they walk upstairs to leave then the fight goes on. The character's actions were jumpy so try to improve your rhythm. Besides that, interesting. |
| romanceaddict chapter 3 . 3/11/2009 great chapter! please update soon! |
| INACTIVEACCOUNT5678 chapter 3 . 3/11/2009 This story is really good! Please update soon. |
| KnightsOfCydonia chapter 3 . 3/11/2009 Awesome chapter! Alik is so possessive of her! Ah man, this is going to be great... can't wait to see her reaction to being bitten (assuming he's biting her!). PLEASE continue this soon! Like... in a month! Ha, kidding (sort of). Update whenever you can! |
| Jevanminx chapter 3 . 3/11/2009 Did he bite her? Because that is just weird to do, especially without her permission, hehehe. Can't wait for the next update. JM |
| Ck90 chapter 3 . 3/11/2009 I was not expecting him to be a demon! Cool by the way! Ah nuzzling does he purr too? Very possesive! Can't wait for the next chapter, but I do have a couple of questions. Who is Justing to Liz? and who is stacis boyfriend? I was confused over that! |
| Haav chapter 3 . 3/11/2009 Wow, it seems like it's been forever since you updated anything! Doubt you need me to tell you, but this made my day! Alik seems quite desperate, doesn't he! I was happy to see Jesse get yelled at. He's creepy. Continue soon! |
| pinkeclipse chapter 3 . 3/11/2009 he marked her! without her permission? |
| julialakewood chapter 3 . 3/10/2009 omg delish. update soon! |