Reviews for Dance with the Devil
failwithpride chapter 2 . 2/7/2009

good story so far

my frend says theres too many swears words but i'm ok with it:)

just wanna know are u going to update anytime soon?

reply? chapter 2 . 1/28/2009
like it ...want more
ssmoochic chapter 2 . 1/14/2009
this is a cool story so far, i hope you dont give up on it
dreamercrys chapter 2 . 1/11/2009
Don't forget about this story...I want to
Sage Witch chapter 2 . 11/15/2008
Hey, calm down. This is really good.
Ck90 chapter 2 . 11/4/2008
Another lovable story! HAHAHA Creeps! Seriously and what is up with Jesse? slightly confsed about that one... Is Alex one of thos Creeps too? Well I guess he has to be considering the fact that h istantly knw what alik was talking about. what does Liz look like? Alik commented about her "not beng wat he expected" but What dose she look like?

XXVantestiaXX chapter 2 . 11/1/2008
HI! I just wanted to let you know that i love your story so far! I love the whole mating thing for stories. I hope that you continue and update soon!
Twist Their Emotions chapter 2 . 11/1/2008
It's very well done. And interesting. I don't think it's going to be like an average mate story- which is really good! Can't wait for next chapter.
KnightsOfCydonia chapter 2 . 11/1/2008
Hmm... I can't tell who the bad guys is. Alik gives me the creeps, but Jesse is a little weird as well... don't know who to like more.

Lovin' the story. Continue soon!
Big Boots Man Of War chapter 2 . 10/31/2008
I like this so far. it's very intriuging. Alik sounds so creepy. I agree very muchly so with Liz when she like runs away from him.

But he seems kind of cool though. I would love to see more though.

(Oh, and I thought I should tell you, that by the sounds of your little comments at the end; you remind me of Gordon Ramsay, though a little tamer. But you should be hapy. He's an awesome person)

julialakewood chapter 2 . 10/31/2008
O keep this up! :D
pinkeclipse chapter 2 . 10/31/2008
how will he convince her? is he possessive?
nomnomnom chapter 2 . 10/31/2008
I like it! I can see a love triangle forming! Ohh, who is going to be the bad guy? Both Alik and Jesse seem... bad. update soon!
KnightsOfCydonia chapter 1 . 10/29/2008
Ha, this story seems to have a lot more cursing in it! (Don't ask why I noticed that)

Is Alik a vampire then? I have a feeling he is... unless he's like a werewolf or something... who knows, your brain is a little fucked up! _ kidding, of course.

I can't wait to see some more. I'd beta for you... but I'm hardly ever free, and since you take so fucking long to write a chapter in the first place, it'd take four times as long for me to get it back to you. But fuck, you don't really need one.

Update ASAP.
dreamer08 chapter 1 . 10/28/2008
i think the plot so far seems rather interesting.. :) i would like to see some more...
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