hey!

good story so far

my frend says theres too many swears words but i'm ok with it:)

just wanna know are u going to update anytime soon?

reply?

like it ...want more

this is a cool story so far, i hope you dont give up on it

Don't forget about this story...I want to read more...

Hey, calm down. This is really good.

Another lovable story! HAHAHA Creeps! Seriously and what is up with Jesse? slightly confsed about that one... Is Alex one of thos Creeps too? Well I guess he has to be considering the fact that h istantly knw what alik was talking about. what does Liz look like? Alik commented about her "not beng wat he expected" but What dose she look like?

HAPPY WRITTINGS!

HI! I just wanted to let you know that i love your story so far! I love the whole mating thing for stories. I hope that you continue and update soon!

It's very well done. And interesting. I don't think it's going to be like an average mate story- which is really good! Can't wait for next chapter.

Hmm... I can't tell who the bad guys is. Alik gives me the creeps, but Jesse is a little weird as well... don't know who to like more.

Lovin' the story. Continue soon!

I like this so far. it's very intriuging. Alik sounds so creepy. I agree very muchly so with Liz when she like runs away from him.

But he seems kind of cool though. I would love to see more though.

(Oh, and I thought I should tell you, that by the sounds of your little comments at the end; you remind me of Gordon Ramsay, though a little tamer. But you should be hapy. He's an awesome person)

xoxoxo

O keep this up! :D

how will he convince her? is he possessive?

I like it! I can see a love triangle forming! Ohh, who is going to be the bad guy? Both Alik and Jesse seem... bad. update soon!

Ha, this story seems to have a lot more cursing in it! (Don't ask why I noticed that)

Is Alik a vampire then? I have a feeling he is... unless he's like a werewolf or something... who knows, your brain is a little fucked up! _ kidding, of course.

I can't wait to see some more. I'd beta for you... but I'm hardly ever free, and since you take so fucking long to write a chapter in the first place, it'd take four times as long for me to get it back to you. But fuck, you don't really need one.

Update ASAP.

i think the plot so far seems rather interesting.. :) i would like to see some more...