Reviews for Dance with the Devil
XxSiennaxX chapter 1 . 10/28/2008
Oh, I really like this so far. Alik seems a tad cruel.

I'd really like to know what happens ASAP - I'm kinda impatient, especially when there is a cliffhanger

Update soon please?

TheKatsPajamas chapter 1 . 10/26/2008
WOOHOO! Another vampire story to read. Lol.

A little creepy? More like off his rocker, haha.

Wonder how Elizabeth is gonna react to this...

Cant wait for the next installment.


Twist Their Emotions chapter 1 . 10/26/2008
This is very well written. I believe you'll get a good response to this. Sure, this story has been done before, but it's usually terribly written. If you make it original, I'm on board.
pinkeclipse chapter 1 . 10/26/2008
so her friends are in on this mate thing? please continue writing! i would love to read more!
hopelessy hopless romantic chapter 1 . 10/25/2008
plz plz plz don't scrap! this story has such good potential! I love already! please update!
ArmedScribbles chapter 1 . 10/25/2008
its very interesting and original. please dont scrap it

update soon please!
breathless night chapter 1 . 10/25/2008
Hell no dont scrap this story. The begining is really good.

Oh i cant wait to find out wat happens between Elizabeth and

Alik can i say DRAMA. Screw tat u dont need a beta!

I cant wait for chapter 2

PS: Update soon plz ;D!
TrishAH wndrlnd chapter 1 . 10/25/2008
No need to scrap it, you're off to a great start. Plus I like your writing style. And despite the fact that I am typically not a fan of this genre, I'm interested in reading more.

Rose chapter 1 . 10/25/2008
This is a great beginning. NO! don't scrap it !.
xbrunnettex0 chapter 1 . 10/25/2008
this is an interesting story so far. i hope you continue to write it.
Donna So chapter 1 . 10/25/2008
hell no don't scrap this and screw beta bcuz i'm wrose wit my grammar and yet i have these people loving my stories.

anyways, i love your's. it's really interesting and something i never read before. please update.
Freakish Idiot chapter 1 . 10/25/2008
Hmm... it's an interesting start. I'd certainly be willing to read some more.

I just have one little question, or rather... I thought of something, its not really a question. OK, here it is. In the beginning of the chapter, Elizabeth seems to be... very focused on the 'otherworld' and its creatures. After realizing that, you'd think she'd jump at the thought that Alik is not human. Wouldn't she be freaking out? Especially if there was a murder involved? Or maybe she'd be a little angrier at the end? But what in the hell do I know.

She was angry at the end, and at the beginning of the next chapter you could shut me up pretty easily.

I just wanted to get my thoughts out.

I'll be waiting for some more. Update when you can.
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