Great story! Loved it! :D

This was an amazing story! Well, done. Couldn't stop reading

This was an awesome story; perfect mix of romance, action, and mystery. I hope you are able to write an epilogue because the ending is very abrupt and you left a lot of loose ends.

I hope you do write an epilogue - I found your story very interesting!

I liked it a lot; it seems kind of like a paranormal romance, the kind that is a part of a long series. :)

AW! That was awesome, i LOVE this story! GREAT job

I read the whole story and it is awesome! I couldn't stop readig it ad I hope you make more like it!

OMG!

I loved your story!

It was great && man did you had me hooked!

Great story!

XOXO

slight correction. I think the name is the demon is actually Malphas. Obviously its just a typo on your part. Just thought I'd let you know.

OMG, I love love love love LOVE this story! Please write an epilogue, I don't want to say good bye to these wonderful characters yet! Very good job!

*wipes away tear* best story evr:):)

This culminated to such a dear, sweet end. That second scene of the last chapter was amazingly intense and tender and all the swoon-worthy things that have made this endeavor so fun and great to be able to follow. Alik has developed as a character as much as the story has, and I think that's a solid nod to you. You've grown so much as a writer; and it was all YOUR doing. I hope that you can look back now and find that the goals you first spoke to me about have been fulfilled as best possible.

Here's to Liz and Alik, and all your other writing projects to come.

I was hoping she'd have a demon child, but I'm happy with the ending :)

Lovely story. You have a cool way of writing.

Hey,

This is probaly on eof the first stories that i have read in a while that is just damn good...

This is an unbelievable story... the content and the way it is structured just makes the story more readable...

Keep continuing writing because you have the genes for it...

love it!