|Reviews for seasonal skidmarks|
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 11/22/2008
I like the seasons and stoplight/driving comparison. That was very unique and it fit really well. I also really loved that last line. It was very poetic. I could almost see them being blown away. Nice job.
| classic violet chapter 1 . 11/18/2008
Dreamy, gorgeous, sad, and thoughtful. I love the second and third stanzas especially. Beautiful. Thanks again for your review :)
| dustytiger chapter 1 . 10/27/2008
wow this is very good, thank you for sharing
| Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 10/26/2008
So many directions that your words can take the reader, for they are rich in texture and metaphors. m
Every day new celebrations brings
Though in meanings not yet realized
For when wasp or bee or ant jaws sting
Care we little for their symmetry.
Yet ensconced in every instance small
Like sharp tiny grains of sand in shells
Irritating to form smoothest pearls
Valued treasures soul might recognize.
For one stalk of grass bent in a field
Bears seed crown of possibilities
Just like one small planet round a sun
In her bosom carries all our souls.