|Reviews for A Plain Summer|
| Alaxe chapter 1 . 10/28/2008
Wow! Really great. I think it works well, I like how you have started to build Whitney. In the beginning the dream was spectacular, and the rest of the writing flowed well although some of it was a bit dry-but as us stated you are only setting up so this is to be expected. Loving your idea, and will be waiting for more!