|Reviews for A Plain Summer|
| Equilibrium chapter 1 . 10/29/2008
A very good starting chapter! It's certainly made me want to read more. As always, the names you come up with are believable and, at the same time, not too ordinary. The surname "Everlette", in particular, has a nice ring to it. Everything else is happily error-free.
One thing I could advise you change is the summary for the story. There are a few grammatical/spelling mistakes in there. "chooses to write it over the Amish culture" should be "chooses to write about the Amish culture", and "her heart tells her different" should be "her heart says otherwise". Apart from that, "relationship" is wrongly spelled as "retionship".
Nice job. This is going on my Alert list. Keep up the good work!
| Alaxe chapter 1 . 10/28/2008
Wow! Really great. I think it works well, I like how you have started to build Whitney. In the beginning the dream was spectacular, and the rest of the writing flowed well although some of it was a bit dry-but as us stated you are only setting up so this is to be expected. Loving your idea, and will be waiting for more!