|Reviews for with all the distant sighs left|
| young and the reckless chapter 1 . 5/8/2009
these words are the definition of hopelessness,
| english summer rain chapter 1 . 10/28/2008
i love this so much. it's so broken, just like the narrator. bits and pieces that make so much sense together, but not at the same time.
and i really like the period you put in front of 'with flickered shadows', the effect it made was awesome. and and and, the you used lack of grammar well, it didn't fuse together into a large block of text, the line breaks and stanza breaks were perfect ARGH.
| softersin chapter 1 . 10/27/2008
Wow. Just wow. You really caught me with the first stanza, "today, blue skies tasted like
broken clocks and empty
You're very talented.
Keep it up. I'll be looking foward for more of your work :)
| Laura Elizabeth chapter 1 . 10/27/2008
"regret mimics silence
and sleeps in the spaces
I really loved those lines. They were absolutely fantastic. I really have no criticism!
Oh and the lines "today, blue skies tasted like
broken clocks" Really, where do you get such creative similes? I loved it!